题目如下；
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below
1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3. 我的建议
跪求啊...
第1个回答 2012-04-22
My Favourite Festival (这篇可以参考,长短适合:)~~
China have a lot of festivals.My favourite festival is the spring festival.Because the spring festival is the beginning of a year.And the new year's Eve we can do our best to play.Do you like play? I think everybody likes play.We can give happy from the games.In the Eve,we can eat a reunion rice.Next day is the spring festival,we will don't eat meat and have a good day. Because a good beginning is the most important for a year.In this day,my family is very happy. So I like the spring festival.
1.My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.It's in February. Though it's always very cold outside,our house is never cold.All the family members get back home,and we have a big meal together.It is fun! I can play with my sisters and brothers. Sometimes it will snow ,so we can fight with snow balls and build a snowman.How interesting!
2.My favourite holiday is Spring Festival.It always takes place in January or February.The date is not fixed,because it is based on the lunar calendar .During the festival ,all the members of family will get together to celebrate it.People will dress up and decorate their house.Children will play and enjoy themselves.Children can also get some "Lucky Money"as their Spring Festival's present.After the clock beats twelve times ,the dinner will begin.Pepople will eat dumplings as the main cours.
3.My favourite festival is Children's Day .Because this day we can play happily and have a break of a day We can get a gift from our parents
4.My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. Why? Because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and me both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books or surf the Internet. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.
I’m always happy at the Spring Festival. Which is your favourite festival?追问
China have a lot of festivals.My favourite festival is the spring festival.Because the spring festival is the beginning of a year.And the new year's Eve we can do our best to play.Do you like play? I think everybody likes play.We can give happy from the games.In the Eve,we can eat a reunion rice.Next day is the spring festival,we will don't eat meat and have a good day. Because a good beginning is the most important for a year.In this day,my family is very happy. So I like the spring festival.
1.My favourite festival is the Spring Festival.It's in February. Though it's always very cold outside,our house is never cold.All the family members get back home,and we have a big meal together.It is fun! I can play with my sisters and brothers. Sometimes it will snow ,so we can fight with snow balls and build a snowman.How interesting!
2.My favourite holiday is Spring Festival.It always takes place in January or February.The date is not fixed,because it is based on the lunar calendar .During the festival ,all the members of family will get together to celebrate it.People will dress up and decorate their house.Children will play and enjoy themselves.Children can also get some "Lucky Money"as their Spring Festival's present.After the clock beats twelve times ,the dinner will begin.Pepople will eat dumplings as the main cours.
3.My favourite festival is Children's Day .Because this day we can play happily and have a break of a day We can get a gift from our parents
4.My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. Why? Because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival.
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country. It is in January or February. Our family get together. We have a big dinner at my grandparents’ home. I always eat a lot of delicious food. My cousin and me both get red packets from our grandparents. My parents usually go shopping with me. We buy some nice clothes for ourselves. We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books or surf the Internet. Sometimes, we greet other people on the phone.
I’m always happy at the Spring Festival. Which is your favourite festival?追问
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第2个回答 2012-04-22
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第3个回答 2012-04-23
With advent of the Internet, a brand-new shopping style gradually comes into people’s life. That
is so-called on-line shopping, which has gained great popularity among more and more web users.
Just as shown in the picture, the young lady is shopping merrily on line. Shopping on line does offer
people great convenience, though there is still a great number of people who are filled with worries
about on-line shopping.
Like many new things, online shopping has its advantages and disadvantages. The biggest
advantage of shopping online is convenience. You order a commodity you want and it will be
delivered to you at door next day. Another advantage is economic. You can gain access to bargains
on the web shops and enjoy all sorts of discounts. However, there are still risks in online shopping.
Entering the card details on the Internet is not completely safe and some of the products you
purchase online may fall short of your expectation.
Shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. With the rapid
growth of online shopping, it is of great urgency that relative laws should be formulated to ensure the
security of online shopping. Here are two pieces of advice for online buyers. When shopping online,
be sure to choose secure and credible websites and read the privacy and security policies before
making any purchases. When paying, use the third party services to so that personal details should
not be revealed. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping
without the concern of being treated.本回答被提问者采纳
is so-called on-line shopping, which has gained great popularity among more and more web users.
Just as shown in the picture, the young lady is shopping merrily on line. Shopping on line does offer
people great convenience, though there is still a great number of people who are filled with worries
about on-line shopping.
Like many new things, online shopping has its advantages and disadvantages. The biggest
advantage of shopping online is convenience. You order a commodity you want and it will be
delivered to you at door next day. Another advantage is economic. You can gain access to bargains
on the web shops and enjoy all sorts of discounts. However, there are still risks in online shopping.
Entering the card details on the Internet is not completely safe and some of the products you
purchase online may fall short of your expectation.
Shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. With the rapid
growth of online shopping, it is of great urgency that relative laws should be formulated to ensure the
security of online shopping. Here are two pieces of advice for online buyers. When shopping online,
be sure to choose secure and credible websites and read the privacy and security policies before
making any purchases. When paying, use the third party services to so that personal details should
not be revealed. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping
without the concern of being treated.本回答被提问者采纳
