星期六是我朋友的生日。我去参加她的生日派对并且给她买了一份生日礼物。她带我参观了她家，并举办了一场烧烤。我们吃了很多东西有鸡翅、可乐......最后我们吃了美味的蛋糕。我们都很高兴。
第1个回答 2012-10-26
Last Saturday,I went to one of my friends' birthday party with a gift.Having visited her house, we began to BBQ.There were many food to enjoy,such as chicken wing ,Cola,and something delicious.Finally,we enjoyed the sweet cake.What a wonderful day we had!
楼主，我这个稍作修改了些，但是会比较顺畅自然，看看用不用得着吧~
楼主，我这个稍作修改了些，但是会比较顺畅自然，看看用不用得着吧~
第2个回答 2012-10-26
Saturday is my friend's birthday. I go to attend her birthday party and bought her a birthday present. She showed me her house, and had a barbecue. We had a lot of things have wings, coke ... Finally we had a delicious cake. We are all very happy.
第3个回答 2012-10-26
Saturday was my friend's birthday. I went to her birthday party and buy her a birthday present. She took me to visit her home and held a barbecue. We ate a lot of stuff chicken wings, cola ... Finally, we ate a delicious cake. We are very pleased.
第4个回答 2012-10-26
Saturday is my friend's birthday. I go to attend her birthday party and bought her a birthday present. She showed me her house, and had a barbecue. We had a lot of things have wings, coke ... Finally we had a delicious cake. We are all very happy. 请采纳
第5个回答 2012-10-26
My friend's birthday was on last Saturday.I went to her birthday with a beautiful gift ,I bought it as her birthday present.she was very happy .She showed me around her house.We held a barbecue.We ate a lot of delicious food such as chicken wings,Coke....... At last ,we shared the delicious cake. We enjoyed ourselves.本回答被提问者和网友采纳
