求英语作文《我的一天》（my day）用过去式写，谢谢

My Day Today was Saturday.I stayed in bed late. I got up at eight.Then I washed the clothes,taked a shower and brushed my teeth.At 8:30,I had breakfast.I ate bread and eggs,drank a cup of milk,they were healthy food. After that,I went to the park and did sports.I played the badminton with my brother.He played it well.I lose,but I also happy.After that 1 hour,I went back home and watched TV. I had lunch at half past eleven,and I did my homework at Saturday afternoon. I drawed picture at four in the afternoon. In the evening,I rided a bike after supper.That's very cool.I saw:the trees were tall,the sky was dark,the lights were bright,the birds were sleepd.On the street,the cars were come and go in great number.It liked a beautiful picture. Finally,I went to bed at a quarter to ten本回答被网友采纳

I had a good day. On Saturday mornday. I did my homework. On Saturday afternoon. I play computer game. I was happy.

我也要问 上面明明是现在时 应该是原型