假如你是李明,你班新来的同学Jim近来常常感到孤独.请你根据下面的提示给他写一个便条,向他提出一些建议。希望他尽快好起来。提示:1.安慰他,多交朋友;2.积极参加班内活动 3.多微笑
要求:1.语意连贯,叙述清楚 2.必须包含所给要点可适当拓展 3,70词左右 4.开头已给出
Dear Jim,
Everyone may feel lonely when they'are in a new place. 求高手解答 高悬赏 在线等
第1个回答 2014-03-08
Dear Jim,
Everyone may feel lonely when they'are in a new place. When l heard your situation at the present ,l felt very sorry about that.But don't worry,l will give you some advice to make you feel better than now.First,you should make more friends because only in that way can you talk with others more and then you will feel that your classmates are friendly to you.Secondly,you should take part in the activities in your class,and it will help you to find the situation you are standing in your class.Thirdly,l think you should smile more because it is a good expression to your classmates and they will be more friendly to you.
Finally,l hope you could get better when you are receiving my letter.
sincerely,
Li Ming本回答被提问者采纳
Everyone may feel lonely when they'are in a new place. When l heard your situation at the present ,l felt very sorry about that.But don't worry,l will give you some advice to make you feel better than now.First,you should make more friends because only in that way can you talk with others more and then you will feel that your classmates are friendly to you.Secondly,you should take part in the activities in your class,and it will help you to find the situation you are standing in your class.Thirdly,l think you should smile more because it is a good expression to your classmates and they will be more friendly to you.
Finally,l hope you could get better when you are receiving my letter.
sincerely,
Li Ming本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答 2014-03-08
Dear Jim,
Everyone may feel lonely when they are in a new place, I fully understand your lone in the heart recently and do hope that you will get better soon.
Please don't worry about this too much, you could choose to make more friends with our classmates and participate the activities held by our class, by which you would get to know everybody around better and could help you to integrate into this new place. And the last but not the least is---smile more, this is a very important fact to attract the person beside you.
Anything more if I could help you, please turn to me anytime.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming.
Everyone may feel lonely when they are in a new place, I fully understand your lone in the heart recently and do hope that you will get better soon.
Please don't worry about this too much, you could choose to make more friends with our classmates and participate the activities held by our class, by which you would get to know everybody around better and could help you to integrate into this new place. And the last but not the least is---smile more, this is a very important fact to attract the person beside you.
Anything more if I could help you, please turn to me anytime.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming.
第3个回答 2014-03-08
But,every thing will come better。Tf you don not want to feel lonely,the best way is making friends. I think more smiling face you have,more friends you will have.SO,you should smile more and more.You also have to take part in your class's activities。That is useful,too.I hope you can get better. 自己写的。绝无抄袭。