本人高一学生，英语成绩及格左右，建议错点语法错几个单词，各位费心了
Doctor Chen 收到侄子陈坤的信提到学校最近有不少同学得了红眼病。假如你是Doctor Chen ，请你给你侄子回一封信，提出预防红眼病的建议。
内容：小心谨慎，但不必惊慌
尽量少去公共场所
养成良好卫生的个人生活习惯，如勤洗手，不揉眼
要求：字数120
至少补充两点建议
词汇：（不要全用）the pink eyes 红眼病 rub noe "s eye 揉眼 towel 毛巾 washbasin 脸盆 infected 被感染的
开头：
Dear Chen Kun
I am delighted to receive your letter asking me how to prevent ourselves from the pink eyes
Yours,
Uncle Chen
第1个回答 2015-08-28
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Ming,a senior high school student from xxx middle school.seeing the recruiting news that you put on Urban Commerce that you are looking volunteers,I immediately start writing this emial to apply for a volunteer,because I wish very much to be able to do something for it BeiJing Olympic Games.
i know there may be many international guests during the Olympic games,so I want to be a english volunteer.although I am now a sixeen-year-old student in middle school,I have learned English for almost 9 years,and I'm able to speak English clearly ang fluently.last year,I got the first price in the our city's English Speech Contest and I have been a member of Shenzhen Volunteer Association for 3 years
in addition,the Olympic Games will be held in July and August,2008,during which is my summer vocation.this gives me plenty of time preparing and servering for the Games.Moreover,I like to help others.I am pleasant and hard-working.追问
I am Li Ming,a senior high school student from xxx middle school.seeing the recruiting news that you put on Urban Commerce that you are looking volunteers,I immediately start writing this emial to apply for a volunteer,because I wish very much to be able to do something for it BeiJing Olympic Games.
i know there may be many international guests during the Olympic games,so I want to be a english volunteer.although I am now a sixeen-year-old student in middle school,I have learned English for almost 9 years,and I'm able to speak English clearly ang fluently.last year,I got the first price in the our city's English Speech Contest and I have been a member of Shenzhen Volunteer Association for 3 years
in addition,the Olympic Games will be held in July and August,2008,during which is my summer vocation.this gives me plenty of time preparing and servering for the Games.Moreover,I like to help others.I am pleasant and hard-working.追问
你这写的什么啊……根本不是我问的那个啊
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