根据您的修改提议，我做了详细的修改，您先看一下，我将再做更改
第1个回答 2010-09-18
According to your proposal, I made a detailed modification. You can have a look first and I will make the further changes.
第2个回答 2010-09-18
According to your proposal, I do the revision of the detailed, you see, I will again do change本回答被提问者采纳
