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第1个回答 2010-09-23
My dream
As we all know,everybody had his/her own dream.some dreamed to be a scientist,others had the dream becoming a star or even a president. However,I was dreaming to be a teacher when I was a little young boy. As far as I knew,teachers were respected by people and they also had a high state of society as well as a farewell salary. Teachers were an honored career although they were hard working. All in all, I dreamed to be a teacher no matter what problem I met and how difficult the situation was.
结构剖析：由一般性观点提出自己的论点（梦想成为老师），列举几个理由支持你的论点（为什么要成为老师：成为老师的优点和克服成为老师的不足），最后总结再一次展示论点（成为老师），可稍微发挥一下。
技巧剖析：（1）简单句+多用连接词=连贯性 （2）可用丰富一点的词汇
As we all know,everybody had his/her own dream.some dreamed to be a scientist,others had the dream becoming a star or even a president. However,I was dreaming to be a teacher when I was a little young boy. As far as I knew,teachers were respected by people and they also had a high state of society as well as a farewell salary. Teachers were an honored career although they were hard working. All in all, I dreamed to be a teacher no matter what problem I met and how difficult the situation was.
结构剖析：由一般性观点提出自己的论点（梦想成为老师），列举几个理由支持你的论点（为什么要成为老师：成为老师的优点和克服成为老师的不足），最后总结再一次展示论点（成为老师），可稍微发挥一下。
技巧剖析：（1）简单句+多用连接词=连贯性 （2）可用丰富一点的词汇
第2个回答 2010-09-21
I had a dream last night. In the dream, I became the first Asian president of the United State. My hands were waiving when all the citizens in the Parliament Square cheered for me. When my announcement of future cooperation with China was made, it seemed to me that the world was connected together.
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