英语作文，老师让写一篇英语作业。

Firstly,I
choose
English
as
my
major
because
it's
where
my
personal
interest
lies.这是第一句。private是私人的而非个人的意思，用personal更好。
第二句开始就有点奇怪咯，我大胆猜测你是想说学英语是因为你喜欢看电影是吧。。。。As
movie
watching
is
my
best
favored
hobby,
learning
English
may
help
me
to
understand
the
meaning
of
the
dialogues
in
the
films
directly
via
listening
instead
of
staring
at
the
captions
all
the
time.
然后，secondly,我想你说的是你的性格适合学英语，但是你的表达是学英语是你的性格。。。。这个似乎不太合适。choose
English
as
my
major
is
the
call
of
my
chracter.然后用optimistic不太好哟，这是乐观的意思，而且你用的是名词。。想说性格外向，可以用extroverted，所以这句应该用I
am
extroverted
and
I
like
to
make
friends.
下边的部分又是我的大胆推测了。你似乎想表达的意思是你想用英语和外国朋友对话，给他帮助，然后你想和你最好的朋友用英语对话，而这位朋友做着与英语相关的工作，希望我的理解是正确的呵呵。I
want
to
speak
to
the
foreigners
and
give
them
a
hand
whenever
it's
necessary
in
English,which
would
be
my
best
favored
language.Also
I
want
to
chat
with
my
friend
in
English,who's
doing
a
English-related
job.
第三点，你似乎是想说学英语是为了提高自己的生活质量是吧。Finally
,I
choose
English
as
my
major
to
make
my
own
life
better.English
may
help
me
much
in
my
future
job,and
as
we
all
know,many
best-paid
jobs
need
one
to
be
a
veteran
English
speaker.
最后。so
,all
above
would
be
my
reasons
to
choose
English
as
my
major.
我的建议是你一定要认真地去分析句子的成分，每个部分在句子是发挥的是什么作用，而不是用单词去堆砌一个句子。然后单词拼写和词性也要留心。呵呵，只要加油，一定能学好，因为你有兴趣，这是学习的动力呀。