In this week,I did a lot of things.
On Monday,I went to the club to play the chess with my classmates.______
On Tuesday,I read books at home and play the piano for one hour.______
On Wednesday,I went the Book City to buy some books.______
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I have to stay at the gate.______
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hour,I came back home.______
It were terrible in my house.______
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip at my parents.______
What a terrible trip is it!______
In this week,I did a lot of things.
On Monday,I went to the club to play the chess with my classmates.
改：On Monday,I went to the club to play chess with my classmates.（把the去掉，在运动和棋类都不用加the，不过乐器要加the）
On Tuesday,I read books at home and play the piano for one hour.
改：On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.（应该用played 过去式）
On Wednesday,I went the Book City to buy some books.
改：On Wednesday,I went to the Book City to buy some books.（went 后面要加to，不能直接加地点）
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I have to stay at the gate.
改：Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.（用had 过去式）
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hour,I came back home.
改：I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.（two hours 用复数）
It were terrible in my house.
改：It was terrible in my house！（这里不能用were 要用was）
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip at my parents.
改：On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip with my parents.（吧at改为with）
What a terrible trip is it!
改：What a terrible trip it was！（把is改为was it提前）
呼~~终于敲完了。
On Monday,I went to the club to play the chess with my classmates.
改：On Monday,I went to the club to play chess with my classmates.（把the去掉，在运动和棋类都不用加the，不过乐器要加the）
On Tuesday,I read books at home and play the piano for one hour.
改：On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.（应该用played 过去式）
On Wednesday,I went the Book City to buy some books.
改：On Wednesday,I went to the Book City to buy some books.（went 后面要加to，不能直接加地点）
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I have to stay at the gate.
改：Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.（用had 过去式）
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hour,I came back home.
改：I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.（two hours 用复数）
It were terrible in my house.
改：It was terrible in my house！（这里不能用were 要用was）
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip at my parents.
改：On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip with my parents.（吧at改为with）
What a terrible trip is it!
改：What a terrible trip it was！（把is改为was it提前）
呼~~终于敲完了。
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第1个回答 2010-08-26
During this week,I have done a lot of things.
On Monday,I went to the club to play chess with my classmates.
On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.
On Wednesday,I went to the Book City to buy some books.
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.
It was terrible in my house.
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip at my parents'.
What a terrible trip it is!
【我也不知道对不对~自己瞎改的~是不是有横线的每句一错？~我第一句也改了点~能力有限~错了别怪我……】
On Monday,I went to the club to play chess with my classmates.
On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.
On Wednesday,I went to the Book City to buy some books.
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.
It was terrible in my house.
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip at my parents'.
What a terrible trip it is!
【我也不知道对不对~自己瞎改的~是不是有横线的每句一错？~我第一句也改了点~能力有限~错了别怪我……】
第2个回答 2010-08-26
On Monday,I went to the club to play chess with my classmates.
On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.
On Wednesday,I went Book City to buy some books.
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.
It was terrible in my house.
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip with my parents.
What a terrible trip it is!
On Tuesday,I read books at home and played the piano for one hour.
On Wednesday,I went Book City to buy some books.
Suddenly,there was a typhoon,I had to stay at the gate.
I waited for the rain to stop.After two hours,I came back home.
It was terrible in my house.
On Saturday,It was fine.I took a trip with my parents.
What a terrible trip it is!
第3个回答 2010-08-26
1：去掉the
2:play加ed
3 went后面加to
4 去掉最后一个the
5去掉to
6 were换was
7 at换with
8 it和is换位置
谁要答案 几岁？ 真么难
2:play加ed
3 went后面加to
4 去掉最后一个the
5去掉to
6 were换was
7 at换with
8 it和is换位置
谁要答案 几岁？ 真么难
