若我能被XXXX录取，那么我将有机会在该校学习4年。我定会好好利用好在该校学习的这4年，让我能真正的成为一名社会所需要的人才。在XXXX里，有七大科目群来培养我们成为全面发展的人才，我会在学习中很快的找到自己所感兴趣的事物并选择自己的专业课程。在4年里首先，我会将研讨、授课、语言、统计、任选科目认真学习掌握。在掌握了课堂上所讲的内容后我还会去寻找、学习相关知识来不断提高自己。在课下、周末或假期休息时间，我会好好的放松自己，打打篮球去结识许多朋友也能慢慢体会到许多我不知道的异国人文；和朋友们去日本各地旅游，因为日本是一个有着丰富文化与美丽风景的国家，我一定不会放过这个留学的机会来游览日本。
学习的重点我现打算会放在经济、商业学上。
因为现在科技发展迅速，交通、通讯等等的技术更是日新月异，世界上各国的联系也越来越紧，这也推动了经济全球化程度越来越高，世界各国的经济联系、交流也越来越多。所以我希望能学习并努力掌握这方面专业领域的知识，为自己以后能去一些跨国公司就职或自己创业打下基础。
第1个回答 2014-01-02
If I could be accepted by XXXX, then I will have the opportunity of studying in that school for 4 years. I will definitely make good use of the 4 years spent at the school studying, to help me become a person with real ability required by society. At XXXX, there are seven large subject groups to help develope us as well-rounded individuals growing in all directions, I will soon find the things that interest me as well as selecting my own major through studying. In these years I will begin by trying my best to master and study the skills of researching and discussing, teaching, language, summarizing and optional subjects. After grasping the content taught in lessons, I will try to find and learn more related knowledge in order to continuously improve myself. During my time off lessons, week-ends or the holidays, I will thoroughly relax, play basketball with hopes of meeting many friends so that I may even slowly experience all the cultural diversities I wasn't aware of; travel with friends in various locations in Japan because Japan is a country with a rich culture and lots of beautiful scenery, I will undoubtedly not miss this opportunity to study abroad to tour around Japan.
I plan to put my focus of study on business and economy studies. This is due to the fact that technology is developing very rapidly nowadays, in particular technology along the lines of transport, communication etc... which are all changing day by day, as the various countries in the world have more and more compact relationships, the rate of globalization of the economy has also been pushed higher and higher, the economical relationships and communications are also becoming more and more frequent between various countries in the world. Therefore, I hope to learn with regards of mastering the profesional knowledge found in this field,so I can build the foundations for my plans of entering multi-nationals businesses or creating my own business.
楼主这可是我一个字一个字翻译的！！！好辛苦！ 望采纳并且希望有帮助~~
I plan to put my focus of study on business and economy studies. This is due to the fact that technology is developing very rapidly nowadays, in particular technology along the lines of transport, communication etc... which are all changing day by day, as the various countries in the world have more and more compact relationships, the rate of globalization of the economy has also been pushed higher and higher, the economical relationships and communications are also becoming more and more frequent between various countries in the world. Therefore, I hope to learn with regards of mastering the profesional knowledge found in this field,so I can build the foundations for my plans of entering multi-nationals businesses or creating my own business.
楼主这可是我一个字一个字翻译的！！！好辛苦！ 望采纳并且希望有帮助~~
第2个回答 2014-01-01
If I could be accepted to XXXX, then I will have the opportunity to study for 4 years in the school. I will make good use of the school in this 4 years, let I can really need as a social person. In XXXX, there are seven courses to train us to become all-round development of talent, I will soon learn to find their own interest in things and to choose their own courses. In the first 4 years, I will study, teaching, language, statistics, optional subjects to carefully study and master. In the hands of the lectures as well when I go to find, learn relevant knowledge to improve yourself. The rest of the time in the class, weekend or holiday, I will be good to relax, play basketball tomeet many friends can also slowly learned a lot I don't know foreign culture;and my friends to go around the country to travel, because Japan is a richculture and beautiful scenery of the country, I will not miss this study abroad opportunities to visit japan.
The focus of learning I now intend to put in the economic, commercialscience.
Because now the rapid development of technology, transportation,communication and technology is change rapidly, all the countries in the world contact is more and more compact, which also contributed to theextent of economic globalization is more and more high, world economy,exchange more and more. So I wish I could study and try to master theprofessional knowledge, as to some Multi-National Corporation office oryour own business foundation.追问
The focus of learning I now intend to put in the economic, commercialscience.
Because now the rapid development of technology, transportation,communication and technology is change rapidly, all the countries in the world contact is more and more compact, which also contributed to theextent of economic globalization is more and more high, world economy,exchange more and more. So I wish I could study and try to master theprofessional knowledge, as to some Multi-National Corporation office oryour own business foundation.追问
这语法太多错了...英语大神能认真的帮帮我吗
第3个回答 2014-01-01
If I can be admitted to XXXX, then I will have the opportunity to study in the school for 4 years. I will learn in the school take advantage of this 4 years, let I can truly become a social needed talents. In the XXXX, there are seven subjects group to train us to become well-rounded individuals, I'll find my interest in learning quickly and choose their own courses. In 4 years, first of all, I will research, teaching, language, statistics, optional course study hard to master. After the master class of the content I will also go to look for, study relevant knowledge to improve ourselves. Under class, weekend or holiday time to rest, I will be fine to relax, playing basketball to make many friends also can slowly realize many exotic humanities; I don't know And friends go to travel around Japan, because Japan is a country with rich culture and beautiful scenery, I must not miss this opportunity to study abroad to visit Japan. The focus of the study I'm going to be on the economy, business study. Because now the development of science and technology rapidly, traffic, communication, etc. Technology is changing, contact of all countries in the world is becoming more and more tight, it also promoted the economic globalization degree is higher and higher, the world's economic ties, more and more communication. So I hope I can study and try to master this aspect in the field of professional knowledge, for his later can go to some multinational company or start their own businesses to lay the foundation.追问
别用百度翻译什么的了，太多错的了......英语大神能不能认真的帮帮我，分大大的啊
