many park have designed to provide entertainment
do you know when the first man-making stellite was launched in china?
you can use the most advancing technology to dinish the experiment
they have dedided to finish the job in a complete new way
these new parks have bariety of interesting things to see and do.
have you been to thepark named with walt disney?
英语改错麻烦说明下理由，谢谢
第1个回答 2010-11-09
have been designed 被动
man-made 人造的 卫星被造
satellite 卫星
advanced 先进的
finish the experiment 完成实验
decided to finish the job 决定完成这项工作
completely new 全新的 修饰形容词用副词
a variety of 多种多样的
to see and to do
不定式要并列
named after Walt Disney 以迪士尼命名的 习惯用法
man-made 人造的 卫星被造
satellite 卫星
advanced 先进的
finish the experiment 完成实验
decided to finish the job 决定完成这项工作
completely new 全新的 修饰形容词用副词
a variety of 多种多样的
to see and to do
不定式要并列
named after Walt Disney 以迪士尼命名的 习惯用法
第2个回答 2010-11-09
park--parks (many + 复数）
have designed-- have been designed (公园被设计出提供了娱乐设施）
man-making ----man-made (人造的）
advancing ---advanced (先进的技术）
dedided -- decided （决定）
bariety -- a bariety
named with -- named本回答被网友采纳
have designed-- have been designed (公园被设计出提供了娱乐设施）
man-making ----man-made (人造的）
advancing ---advanced (先进的技术）
dedided -- decided （决定）
bariety -- a bariety
named with -- named本回答被网友采纳
第3个回答 2010-11-09
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第4个回答 2010-11-09
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