大学三年里,我不仅学到了专业知识,还交到了很多好朋友,学会了更好地与人相处,这是我生命中最美好的时光。
In the three years,I not only learned professional knowledge, but also made many friends, learned to get along better with people, this is the best time of my life. 还有这个 对不? 不对的话怎么改? 谢了谢了谢了
In the three years,I not only learned professional knowledge, but also made many friends, learned to get along better with people, this is the best time of my life. 这个 对不? 不对的话怎么改? 谢了谢了谢了
In the three years,I not only learned professional knowledge, but also made many friends, learned to get along better with people, this is the best time of my life. 还有这个 对不? 不对的话怎么改? 谢了谢了谢了
追答不对,一句中不能出现两个主语。
而且 not only 部分要倒装
把friends 和learned中的 , 改为and;
把 ,this 改为 .That
另一位大神说时态用的还不对 应该怎么改?
追答过去式没有问题。
把最后一句断开,用现在时
not only have I learned professional knowledge,but also made many friends,learned to get along better with people.this is the best time in my life? 这样可以吗?
追答learned 和 knowledge 不搭,改成acquired,This首字母大写
别忘了 In the 3 years in university...