短文改错：My father is a doctor and is always busy in his work. One evening, we were planned to have a party to celebrate my birthday. Father said he would come back on time. But she did't come back until 11:30. We have been waiting for him almost the whole evening. From then later, I began to hate him. This morning, Mother told me what Father was ill. "It's none of my business," I said in cold voice. Mother said sadly, "Your father works hard for the the patients. He is very tired that he has become ill. You should understand him. "Heard this, I felt ashamed of my rude. So Imade an apology to my father.
第1个回答 2013-04-04
My father is a doctor and he is always busy at his work. One evening we planned to have a party to celebrate my birthday .He said he woud come back on time. But he didn't come back until 11:30. We had been waiting for him for almost the whole evening. From then on , I began to hate him. This moring , My mother told me that my father was ill. " It's none of my business". I said in cold tune. She said sadly," Your father works hard for the patients. He is too tired to be ill. You should understand him . " I felt ashamed fo my rudeness on hearing this. So I made an apology to my father ,
第2个回答 2013-04-04
My father is a doctor and is always busy in his work. One evening, we planned to have a party to celebrate my birthday. Father said he would come back on time. But he did't come back until 11:30. We had been waiting for him almost the whole evening. From then on, I began to hate him. This morning, Mother told me that Father was ill. "It's none of my business," I said in cold voice. Mother said sadly, "Your father works hard for the the patients. He is so tired that he has become ill. You should understand him. "Hearing this, I felt ashamed of my rude. So I made an apology to my father.
