假如你叫王艳青,在一中读书,你是一个很好的学生,同时你又是一个性格不怎么外向的女骇,今天早上你上学迟到了,张老师对此很生气,你感到很伤心,于是你写一封信给老师,向他道歉,向他解释是因为帮助一个生病的同学去医院.
Dear Mr Zhang,
I'm Wang Yanqing.I was late for school this morning.I'm very sorry about that.This morning,Jack rang me up.He told me that he was ill.I thought I should help him.I took him to the hospital.Then I went to school.I know you are very angry,but I hope you can excuse me.Thank you.
yours
Wang Yanqing
这篇作文有没有什么错误的地方需要改正啊?
第1个回答 2006-03-22
张老师:
你好,在这里我要先为早上的迟到感到非常的抱歉,其次再向您解释一下我迟到的原因.
今天早上杰克告诉我说他身体不舒服,所以我先送他到医院后再赶回来上课的,我知道您对此事很生气,真的非常对不起,希望张老师能谅解.
您的学生:王艳青
英文为:Mr./Mrs. Zhang:
How are you!Must be late first in here me for the early morning feels the unusual regret,Next to you explained again I am late reason
This morning Jake tells me to say his body is uncomfortable,Therefore I deliver after him to hurry back again first the hospital attend class,I knew you are angry very much to this matter,Really extremely sorry,Hoped Mr./Mrs. Zhang can forgive
Your student:Wang Yanqing
你好,在这里我要先为早上的迟到感到非常的抱歉,其次再向您解释一下我迟到的原因.
今天早上杰克告诉我说他身体不舒服,所以我先送他到医院后再赶回来上课的,我知道您对此事很生气,真的非常对不起,希望张老师能谅解.
您的学生:王艳青
英文为:Mr./Mrs. Zhang:
How are you!Must be late first in here me for the early morning feels the unusual regret,Next to you explained again I am late reason
This morning Jake tells me to say his body is uncomfortable,Therefore I deliver after him to hurry back again first the hospital attend class,I knew you are angry very much to this matter,Really extremely sorry,Hoped Mr./Mrs. Zhang can forgive
Your student:Wang Yanqing
参考资料：其中张老师是男的就写Mr.女的就写Mrs.
第2个回答 2006-03-22
Dear Mr Zhang,
I'm terribly sorry thatI was late for school this morning. For Jack called me and said that he was ill.I thought I should help him so I took him to the hospital.After that, I hurried to shool but failed to arrive on time.I think you must be very angry,but could you forgive me?Thank you.
Yours,
Wang Yanqing
ps:最好在右上角写明日期。
署名要放在右下角。yours大写首字母，后面打逗号。本回答被网友采纳
I'm terribly sorry thatI was late for school this morning. For Jack called me and said that he was ill.I thought I should help him so I took him to the hospital.After that, I hurried to shool but failed to arrive on time.I think you must be very angry,but could you forgive me?Thank you.
Yours,
Wang Yanqing
ps:最好在右上角写明日期。
署名要放在右下角。yours大写首字母，后面打逗号。本回答被网友采纳
