求解求解 别在网上去复制...没有的 = = 。 寄宿完过后想给寄宿家庭写邮件表示感谢。 自己英语太差了。接下来该写什么或者有什么修改的
第1个回答 2013-09-19
Hi, Everybody,
How are you guys now days?
It was a pleasure to be able to stay with you. My English is not very good, still isn't, but I am really grateful for your care and friendship. Everyday in Vormont was so enjoyable, even the animals are friendly too.
I am attending the Foreign Language High School of ChongQing. Hopefully, my English will improve and if we ever have the chance to meet again, I will be able to express my appreciate in person.
Till the day we meet again.
Regards,
XXXX
帮你改得有人味些， dear神马的太严肃了。
大意是谢谢你们的照顾，我现在在学英文，下次有机会当面说谢谢。
How are you guys now days?
It was a pleasure to be able to stay with you. My English is not very good, still isn't, but I am really grateful for your care and friendship. Everyday in Vormont was so enjoyable, even the animals are friendly too.
I am attending the Foreign Language High School of ChongQing. Hopefully, my English will improve and if we ever have the chance to meet again, I will be able to express my appreciate in person.
Till the day we meet again.
Regards,
XXXX
帮你改得有人味些， dear神马的太严肃了。
大意是谢谢你们的照顾，我现在在学英文，下次有机会当面说谢谢。
第2个回答 2013-09-19
1 网上一大堆，你英文程度不够而已，google搜索'thank you letter to host family'
2 你的英语不好他们也知道，需要加工吗？个人觉得没必要，把一些明显的错误修正就好。
3 Dear host family 实在太没礼貌了，你不知道他们姓什么吗？其中任何一个的名字？如果知道，改成Dear Richard and the Smith family的格式。
3 所有标点符号后面留一个空格/space
It's a pleasure
to come to your home
maybe I was little too silent/quiet
vormont还是Vermont啊？第一个字母大写，后面加逗号
are so cute
学校名字的第一个字母大写
最后那个and第一个字母不要大写本回答被提问者和网友采纳
2 你的英语不好他们也知道，需要加工吗？个人觉得没必要，把一些明显的错误修正就好。
3 Dear host family 实在太没礼貌了，你不知道他们姓什么吗？其中任何一个的名字？如果知道，改成Dear Richard and the Smith family的格式。
3 所有标点符号后面留一个空格/space
It's a pleasure
to come to your home
maybe I was little too silent/quiet
vormont还是Vermont啊？第一个字母大写，后面加逗号
are so cute
学校名字的第一个字母大写
最后那个and第一个字母不要大写本回答被提问者和网友采纳
