大家好，我这里有几句英语句子，每个句子有一个错误，大家能不能帮我改一下。请简单说明一下为什么这样改，谢谢。
1.can i use your umbrella?you might not using it.
2.i am preferring tea to coffee
3.HongKong is one of the crowdest places in the world
4.my grandfather lives in Hainan Island for over 30 years.
5.He has travel to many countries.China is the one he likes most among all of them
6 How would you like to join in me for dinner tonight?
7.would you mind pick up the dry cleaning?no, not at all
8.after they sang Christmas carols ,they goes to bed
1.can i use your umbrella?you might not (be) using it.
我能用你的伞吗？反正你不用
楼主可以把原句中后面的修饰词might not去掉 会发现人称you和动词进行时using之间缺少一个be动词 因而加入be
2.i (prefer) tea to coffee
比起咖啡，我更喜欢茶
这是一个普通的陈述句 不表述某人意愿 不表述某时刻某人的状态 可以用于自我介绍 而用ing形式的话则是对某人此刻状态的描述 译为“比起咖啡，我正在喜欢茶” 事态不对而且不合逻辑
3.HongKong is one of the (most crowded) places in the world
香港是世界上最拥挤的地方之一
原句中crowd是名词 人群的意思 名词自然没有比较级和最高级 因而crowdest是错误的 只能用形容词crowded 它的比较级和最高级分别在前面加more和most
4.my grandfather (has lived) in Hainan Island for over 30 years
我的祖父在海南岛已经住了30多年了
for+时间段 是典型的完成时句式 不能用现在时
5.He has (traveled) to many countries。China is the one he likes most among all of them
他玩过很多国家。中国是这些国家中他最喜欢的。
既然用了完成时就要注意动词要变成完成时时态 明显的错误
6.How would you like to join me for dinner tonight?(in去掉)
和我一起吃晚饭怎么样？
join+人 加入某人的意思 join in +某活动 加入某活动的意思 固定句式
7.（Do） you mind pick up the dry cleaning?no, not at all
去拿干洗好吗？好的（介意去拿干洗吗？不介意）
would强调发问者的愿望 通过句意 此刻发问者的意愿肯定是回答者不介意才对 但用would的话与意愿相反 不能用would
8.after they sang Christmas carols ,they went to bed
他们唱完圣诞颂歌睡觉了
前后时态要保持一致 前半句用得是过去时 后面也要用过去时
我能用你的伞吗？反正你不用
楼主可以把原句中后面的修饰词might not去掉 会发现人称you和动词进行时using之间缺少一个be动词 因而加入be
2.i (prefer) tea to coffee
比起咖啡，我更喜欢茶
这是一个普通的陈述句 不表述某人意愿 不表述某时刻某人的状态 可以用于自我介绍 而用ing形式的话则是对某人此刻状态的描述 译为“比起咖啡，我正在喜欢茶” 事态不对而且不合逻辑
3.HongKong is one of the (most crowded) places in the world
香港是世界上最拥挤的地方之一
原句中crowd是名词 人群的意思 名词自然没有比较级和最高级 因而crowdest是错误的 只能用形容词crowded 它的比较级和最高级分别在前面加more和most
4.my grandfather (has lived) in Hainan Island for over 30 years
我的祖父在海南岛已经住了30多年了
for+时间段 是典型的完成时句式 不能用现在时
5.He has (traveled) to many countries。China is the one he likes most among all of them
他玩过很多国家。中国是这些国家中他最喜欢的。
既然用了完成时就要注意动词要变成完成时时态 明显的错误
6.How would you like to join me for dinner tonight?(in去掉)
和我一起吃晚饭怎么样？
join+人 加入某人的意思 join in +某活动 加入某活动的意思 固定句式
7.（Do） you mind pick up the dry cleaning?no, not at all
去拿干洗好吗？好的（介意去拿干洗吗？不介意）
would强调发问者的愿望 通过句意 此刻发问者的意愿肯定是回答者不介意才对 但用would的话与意愿相反 不能用would
8.after they sang Christmas carols ,they went to bed
他们唱完圣诞颂歌睡觉了
前后时态要保持一致 前半句用得是过去时 后面也要用过去时
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第1个回答 2008-12-24
1.应该是You might not use it.
might情态动词后需要跟动词原形。
2.prefer to
vt. 更喜欢(宁愿)
应该是
I prefer tea to coffee.
一般不使用现在时态。更多时候用动词。
3.in the world 表示“究竟，到底”，应该使用“all over the world或者around the world”从而表示“世界各地”
4.这句不太肯定，感觉是for over 30 years.有问题。
for nearly 30 years.
或者把for去掉。表示“我的祖父住在海南岛超过30年了”
5.He has travel to many countries.China is the one he likes most among all of them.
He has travelled to many countries. China is the one he likes best among all of them.
这句话中有两处错误。travelled和best
最高级使用不当。
6.去掉in。表示“一起”
如：
Would you like to join me for lunch?
跟我一起吃午餐吗？
7.应是picking up
Would you mind 后边长跟动名词。
8.时态不对。
应该是went。
他们唱完圣诞颂歌后上床睡觉。
might情态动词后需要跟动词原形。
2.prefer to
vt. 更喜欢(宁愿)
应该是
I prefer tea to coffee.
一般不使用现在时态。更多时候用动词。
3.in the world 表示“究竟，到底”，应该使用“all over the world或者around the world”从而表示“世界各地”
4.这句不太肯定，感觉是for over 30 years.有问题。
for nearly 30 years.
或者把for去掉。表示“我的祖父住在海南岛超过30年了”
5.He has travel to many countries.China is the one he likes most among all of them.
He has travelled to many countries. China is the one he likes best among all of them.
这句话中有两处错误。travelled和best
最高级使用不当。
6.去掉in。表示“一起”
如：
Would you like to join me for lunch?
跟我一起吃午餐吗？
7.应是picking up
Would you mind 后边长跟动名词。
8.时态不对。
应该是went。
他们唱完圣诞颂歌后上床睡觉。
第2个回答 2008-12-24
1.You might not use it.
原因:might是情态动词,后面跟动词原型.can/may/must/could/might等+(not)+do
2.I prefer tea to coffee.
这里没有必要用进行时态.
3.crowd是动词,它的形容词形式是crowded.
HongKong is one of the most crowded places in the world.
4.My grandfather has lived in Hainan Island for over 30 years.
这里要用现在完成时.
5.He had travelled many countries.这里要用过去完成时.
6.Would you like to join me for dinner tonight?
Would you like to? 的句型是表示建议的.join sb.表示加入某人,和某人一起.
7.Would you mind picking up the dry cheaning?
Would you mind 后面要用现在分词的形式,这是固定搭配.
Would you mind doing sth.?
8.前后时态不一致.后半句为:They went to bed.
原因:might是情态动词,后面跟动词原型.can/may/must/could/might等+(not)+do
2.I prefer tea to coffee.
这里没有必要用进行时态.
3.crowd是动词,它的形容词形式是crowded.
HongKong is one of the most crowded places in the world.
4.My grandfather has lived in Hainan Island for over 30 years.
这里要用现在完成时.
5.He had travelled many countries.这里要用过去完成时.
6.Would you like to join me for dinner tonight?
Would you like to? 的句型是表示建议的.join sb.表示加入某人,和某人一起.
7.Would you mind picking up the dry cheaning?
Would you mind 后面要用现在分词的形式,这是固定搭配.
Would you mind doing sth.?
8.前后时态不一致.后半句为:They went to bed.
第3个回答 2008-12-24
1.can I use your umbrella?you might not using it.
2.I am preferring to coffee
3.HongKong is one of the crowdest places in the class
4.My grandfather like in Hainan Island over 30 years.
5.He has travel to many countries.China is the he likes most among all of them
6. would you like to join in me for dinner tonight?
7.would you like mind pick up the dry cleaning?no, not at all.
8.after they sang Christmas carols ,they goes to class
采纳我的吧！！
2.I am preferring to coffee
3.HongKong is one of the crowdest places in the class
4.My grandfather like in Hainan Island over 30 years.
5.He has travel to many countries.China is the he likes most among all of them
6. would you like to join in me for dinner tonight?
7.would you like mind pick up the dry cleaning?no, not at all.
8.after they sang Christmas carols ,they goes to class
采纳我的吧！！
