求两篇。
50词，初一水平。有中文。
This summer vacation, I went to Beijing.
It was a very great city!
We went to the Great Wall first.Like its name,it was very great.We can see many mountians around.
Then we went to visit Tian'an Men Square.It was also fantastic.
We lived in a small house in a Beijing Hutung, it was a traditional Beijing building called 'four-section compound'.
I enjoyed myself a lot.
I love Beijing!
把里面的北京该了，还有有些地方改了就好了 ！
It was a very great city!
We went to the Great Wall first.Like its name,it was very great.We can see many mountians around.
Then we went to visit Tian'an Men Square.It was also fantastic.
We lived in a small house in a Beijing Hutung, it was a traditional Beijing building called 'four-section compound'.
I enjoyed myself a lot.
I love Beijing!
把里面的北京该了，还有有些地方改了就好了 ！
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第1个回答 2009-01-24
楼主把作文水平与词数要求说说吧，那样写出来的才更合你要求。
