Energy conservation,a shift to other fuels and a decline in the importance of heavy,energy-intensive industries have reduced oil consumption.
heavy 后面这个逗号是不是应该去掉呢？ 若不去掉这个句子是什么结构啊？
in the importance of heavy,energy-intensive 这些是不是 进一步说明 a decline ？
Energy conservation,a shift to other fuels and a decline in the importance of heavy,energy-intensive industries 他们一起构成句子的并列主语 ？ 我这样说对吗？
in the importance of heavy,energy-intensive heavy 后面为什么用逗号分开 我还是不明白！
不用,这是个正确的句子
前面三个是并列的主语,句子意思是：节约能源,改用其它燃料,降低重工业、能源密集型工业的重要性,减少了石油消费。
heavy 和 energy-intensive 都是形容词修饰 industry
问题补充中说的对,句子压缩成分后就是 conservation,a shift and a decline have reduced consumption.
英语中没有顿号, heavy 和 energy-intensive是两个修饰 industry 的形容词,用逗号隔开
a decline in sth 是某事物的下降的意思
the importance of sth 是某事物的重要性的意思
heavy industry 是重工业的意思
energy-intensive industry 是能源密集型工业的意思
前面三个是并列的主语,句子意思是：节约能源,改用其它燃料,降低重工业、能源密集型工业的重要性,减少了石油消费。
heavy 和 energy-intensive 都是形容词修饰 industry
问题补充中说的对,句子压缩成分后就是 conservation,a shift and a decline have reduced consumption.
英语中没有顿号, heavy 和 energy-intensive是两个修饰 industry 的形容词,用逗号隔开
a decline in sth 是某事物的下降的意思
the importance of sth 是某事物的重要性的意思
heavy industry 是重工业的意思
energy-intensive industry 是能源密集型工业的意思
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第1个回答 2009-01-28
逗号不用去掉...你这句话是不是还是病句?
我个人感觉是
Energy conservation, a shift to other fuels and a decline in the importance of heavy, energy-intensive industries, have reduced oil consumption.
从a shift到industries是插入语,修饰energy conservation
我个人感觉是
Energy conservation, a shift to other fuels and a decline in the importance of heavy, energy-intensive industries, have reduced oil consumption.
从a shift到industries是插入语,修饰energy conservation
第2个回答 2009-01-30
逗号不用去掉...你这句话是不是还是病句?
Energy conservation, a shift to other fuels and a decline in the importance of heavy, energy-intensive industries, have reduced oil consumption.
从a shift到industries是插入语,修饰energy conservation
Energy conservation, a shift to other fuels and a decline in the importance of heavy, energy-intensive industries, have reduced oil consumption.
从a shift到industries是插入语,修饰energy conservation
第3个回答 2009-01-28
两个逗号之间作插入语,补充说明的用法.
你可以去掉整串,不影响句子意思XD
你可以去掉整串,不影响句子意思XD
