共有九错误一正确，我用 ﹠表示句末： Dear Sir, I'm a senior three student. I often do bad in my&exams,so I have been trying to catch up the others.&But I'm such concerned about my marks that sometimes&I cannot eat or sleep well at a night .I'm afraid that&i（我不大写了，忽略大写）may get low marks in the test again as if i work&hard than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&i cannot fix my mind on my study,whenever i think of&this.it is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on&my school works.i'm feeling very sad.would you&pkease telling me how i should deal with my worry?
Dear Sir, I'm a senior three student. I often do bad【badly】 in my&exams,so I have been trying to catch up 【with】the others.&But I'm（ such）【so】 concerned about my marks that sometimes&I cannot eat or sleep well at 【a去掉】 night .I'm afraid that&i（我不大写了，忽略大写）may get low marks in the test again as【改成even】 if i work&hard 【harder】than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&i cannot fix my mind on my study,whenever i think of&this.it is obvious that the worry 【加个has 】had a bad effect on&my school works.i'm feeling 【I feel】very sad.would you&pkease telling【tell】 me how i should deal with my worry?
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第1个回答 2012-09-25
Dear Sir, I'm a senior three student. I often do badly in my&exams,so I have been trying to catch up with the others.&But I'm so concerned about my marks that sometimes&I cannot eat or sleep well at night .I'm afraid that&i（我不大写了，忽略大写）may get low marks in the test again even if i work&harder than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&i cannot focus my mind on my study,whenever i think of&this.it is obvious that the worry has a bad effect on&my school works.i'm feeling very sad.would you&pkease tell me how i should deal with my worry?本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答 2012-09-25
Dear Sir, I'm a senior three student. I often do badly（副词） in my
exams,so I have been trying to catch up with （追上，赶上）the others.
But I'm so（such后面一般接名词，so。。。that） concerned about my marks that sometimes
I cannot eat or sleep well at （去掉a，at night 在晚上的意思）night .I'm afraid that
i（我不大写了，忽略大写）may get low marks in the test again even if（即使，as if 是好像的意思） i work&
harder（比较级） than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&
i cannot fix my mind on my study,when（when 和whenever都是时间状语从句的引导词，区别就是when 表示当...的时候，whenever表示无论何时。when无任意性，而whenver 有任意性。） i think of&
this.it is obvious that the worry has（现在时） a bad effect on&
my school works.i'm feeling very sad.would you&
please tell（please后加动词原形） me how i should deal with my worry?
exams,so I have been trying to catch up with （追上，赶上）the others.
But I'm so（such后面一般接名词，so。。。that） concerned about my marks that sometimes
I cannot eat or sleep well at （去掉a，at night 在晚上的意思）night .I'm afraid that
i（我不大写了，忽略大写）may get low marks in the test again even if（即使，as if 是好像的意思） i work&
harder（比较级） than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&
i cannot fix my mind on my study,when（when 和whenever都是时间状语从句的引导词，区别就是when 表示当...的时候，whenever表示无论何时。when无任意性，而whenver 有任意性。） i think of&
this.it is obvious that the worry has（现在时） a bad effect on&
my school works.i'm feeling very sad.would you&
please tell（please后加动词原形） me how i should deal with my worry?
第3个回答 2012-09-25
Dear Sir, I'm a senior three student. I often do BADLY in my&exams. I have been trying to catch up the others but I'm so concerned about my marks that sometimes I cannot eat or sleep well at night .I'm afraid that I may get low marks in the test again even though i work harder than before.i have no courage to face low marks. and i cannot concentrate my mind on my study,whenever i think of that .it is obvious that the worry has a bad effect on my school work and test results. i'm feeling very sad.Would you pkease tell me how i should deal with my worry?
第4个回答 2012-09-25
1 bad 改为badly
2 up 后加 with
3 such 改为 so
4 a 去掉
5 as 改为 even
6 hard 改为harder
7 正确
8 had改为 has
9 works 改为 work
10 telling改为 tell
2 up 后加 with
3 such 改为 so
4 a 去掉
5 as 改为 even
6 hard 改为harder
7 正确
8 had改为 has
9 works 改为 work
10 telling改为 tell
