可以给财富悬赏,多上没没问题,拜托各位了,一定要新写的,而且是三四年级的水平,拜托各位了
MY holiday
I was busy enough!
First,I had to do my homework ,It took me 3 days.But I didn't compare it because I learned a lot of things in my home work.And this holiday I was very excited. BecauseI went to Beijing !I saw zhe nest and Water meter! It's so cool and beautful! I was really took pride in Beijing , I thought Beijing is a grand city.
I love Beijing ! I love the Olypic Games! I love China!
希望能搞帮助你昂~~
希望被采纳咧!追问
I was busy enough!
First,I had to do my homework ,It took me 3 days.But I didn't compare it because I learned a lot of things in my home work.And this holiday I was very excited. BecauseI went to Beijing !I saw zhe nest and Water meter! It's so cool and beautful! I was really took pride in Beijing , I thought Beijing is a grand city.
I love Beijing ! I love the Olypic Games! I love China!
希望能搞帮助你昂~~
希望被采纳咧!追问
是新写的吗
追答不是咧
追问我想要新写的,因为老师啊,不过还是谢谢你
追答呵呵,希望你能够快点找到自己希望找到的!
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第1个回答 2012-08-21
My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, " Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, " There are beautiful !"
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum追问
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum追问
是新编的吗?
追答绝对滴。。。。。。。。采纳一下吧。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
本回答被提问者采纳第2个回答 2012-08-21
My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, " Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, " There are beautiful !"
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum追问
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum追问
有意思吗
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