请英语高手帮我修改一下这篇作文!改一下语法和逻辑错误以及不妥之处~

大的改动也可以的!急!!!
I Want to Change Something about Myself
Before I prepared to write this article, I have never considered changing anything about myself. In the past, I often complained when I was reproved for my mistake, and I felt bad. Gradually, I became more and more selfish and over-confident. But now I grow up, I need to stop this behavior. Perhaps I cannot control others’ view on me, but I am able to change myself to be better. W. Edwards Deming said, “It is not enough to do your best; you must know what to do, and THEN do your best.” In order to be ready to face the world’s stiff competition, I want to change my bad habits, the way I treat others, and my attitude toward study.
First of all, I want to change my bad habits such as getting up too late everyday. You may not believe it-----as far as I know, getting up early is too difficult for me. I often sleep for fifteen hours continuously so that I waste a lot of time. Obviously, I can do many meaningful things in this time such as reading English aloud, doing exercises, even having a sumptuous breakfast. In this way, my life will become more and more healthy and meaningful. Therefore, I will persist in getting up early.
Secondly, I want to change the way I treat others. I will say honestly that I am a selfish girl. I always neglect others’ feeling when I do something I really want to do. In addition, I cannot tolerate others’ mistake. I am so self-willed that I hurt some friends. However, I still have many friends who have a very tolerant attitude towards me. I am grateful for their kindness. Now, I realize that my behavior is not favorable and I will try my best to overcome myself.
Lastly, I want to change my attitude towards study. In the past, I thought study is very dull and dry. I treated my study carelessly since entering this university, because I didn’t like my major. Many times, I thought that if I came back to my high school life, I would choose another major which I like best. But now, I feel I am very stupid. As a useful language, English have become more and more important. The Olympic Games is going to be hold in our country, as an English major student, I have responsibility for being a good volunteer. So, I must study English with a positive attitude.
I really want to change myself, because I want to be better. No matter how difficult it is, I persevere in these changes. All in all, I will attempt to change my bad habits, the way I treat others, and my attitude towards my study.

I Want to Change Something about Myself
Before I prepared to write this article, I had never considered changing anything about myself. In the past, I often complained whenever I was blamed for my mistakes, and I felt bad about it. Gradually, I became more and more selfish and over-confident. But now I have grown up, I need to change this behavior. Perhaps I cannot control others’ views on me, but I am able to change myself for the better. W. Edwards Deming said, “It is not enough to do your best; you must know what to do, and THEN do your best.” In order to get ready to face the world’s fierce competition, I want to give up my bad habits, the way I treat others, and my attitude toward study.
First of all, I want to throw away my bad habits, for instance, getting up too late every day. You may not believe it-----as far as I know, getting up early is too difficult for me. I often sleep for fifteen hours continuously so that I waste a lot of time. However,I can obviously do many meaningful things during this time ,such as reading English aloud, doing exercises, and even having a rich breakfast. In this way, my life will become more and more healthy and meaningful. Therefore, I will persist in getting up early.
Secondly, I want to change the way I treat others. I will say honestly that I am a selfish girl. I always neglect others’ feelings when I do something I really want to do. In addition, I cannot tolerate others’ mistakes. I am so self-willed that I hurt some friends. However, I still have many friends who have a very tolerant attitude towards me. I am grateful for their kindness and their patience. Now, I do realize that my behavior is not favorable and I will try my best to overcome myself.
Lastly, I want to change my attitude towards study. In the past, I thought study was very dull and dry. I have treated my study carelessly since entering this university, because I didn’t like my major. Many times, I thought that if I had returned to my high school life, I would have chosen another major which I like best. But now, I feel I am very stupid. As a useful language, English has become more and more important. The Olympic Games is going to be held in our country, and as an English major, I have responsibility for being a good volunteer. So, I must study English with a positive attitude.
I really want to change myself, because I want to be better. No matter how difficult it is, I shall persevere in these changes. All in all, I will do my outmost to change my bad habits, the way I treat others, and my attitude towards my study.基本忠实于原文,希望你能喜欢,真的为你的转变高兴,祝贺一下啦!
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