如题所述
根据文章顺序，更改如下：
1. to relaxed 改成 to relax
2. remember to being 改成 remember to be
3. them step off 改成 them to step off
4. and talk loudly 改成 nor talk loudly
5. Trying to remember 改成 Try to remember
6. act polite 改成 act politely
7. a few phrase 改成 a few phrases
8. made a effort 改成 made an effort
9. do anything which 改成 do anything that
10. in the prison 改成 in prison
保证准确率！
1. to relaxed 改成 to relax
2. remember to being 改成 remember to be
3. them step off 改成 them to step off
4. and talk loudly 改成 nor talk loudly
5. Trying to remember 改成 Try to remember
6. act polite 改成 act politely
7. a few phrase 改成 a few phrases
8. made a effort 改成 made an effort
9. do anything which 改成 do anything that
10. in the prison 改成 in prison
保证准确率！
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第1个回答 2012-04-28
第一行travel改为travelling
第一行relaxed改为relax
第二行remember to being 改为remember to be
第三行force them 后加上to
第四行polite改为politely
第四行phrase改为phrases
第六行respect后加上for
第七行which改为that追问
第一行relaxed改为relax
第二行remember to being 改为remember to be
第三行force them 后加上to
第四行polite改为politely
第四行phrase改为phrases
第六行respect后加上for
第七行which改为that追问
你不知道一篇有10处错吗？
追答其他的我不肯定 还有很明显后面那人抄袭我的
第2个回答 2012-05-02
1. to relaxed 改成 to relax
2. remember to being 改成 remember to be
3. them step off 改成 them to step off
4. and talk loudly 改成 or talk loudly
5. Trying to remember 改成 Try to remember
6. act polite 改成 act politely
7. a few phrase 改成 a few phrases
8. made a effort 改成 made an effort
9. deeply--deep
10. do anything which 改成 do anything that
11. hurting后的to去掉
12. in the prison 改成 in prison
所以我认为这篇文章不止10处错误。本回答被提问者采纳
2. remember to being 改成 remember to be
3. them step off 改成 them to step off
4. and talk loudly 改成 or talk loudly
5. Trying to remember 改成 Try to remember
6. act polite 改成 act politely
7. a few phrase 改成 a few phrases
8. made a effort 改成 made an effort
9. deeply--deep
10. do anything which 改成 do anything that
11. hurting后的to去掉
12. in the prison 改成 in prison
所以我认为这篇文章不止10处错误。本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2012-04-29
travel改为travelling
relaxed改为relax
remember to being 改为remember to be
force them 后加上to
polite改为politely
phrase改为phrases
respect后加上for
which改为that追问
relaxed改为relax
remember to being 改为remember to be
force them 后加上to
polite改为politely
phrase改为phrases
respect后加上for
which改为that追问
一篇有10处错。。。没改全
