如题所述
Dear Mr.Li,
Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library.
But I find some problems in the library.First,A lot of people want to look books what was new.but, I can't find new books in the library.And second,the book in the bookshelfs where was in disorder.you should clear it.Third,there is a light what is bad in a reading room.Please repair it.The last,It is a big problem.As we know,the library is quiet.but,some administrators chetting each other when they worked.It was impolite for readers.
So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these mentioned as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Liming,
I am so delighted that you turn to me when coming across some difficulties .
As a proverb goes “failure is the mother of success”. Therefore，this failure is not on behalf of anything but helps to gain more valuble experience to make you do do better next time. So my opinions are as follows.
Above all ，according to your study habit ，I sincerely point it out that it does harm to you health if you chronically stay up late while a strong body demonstrtes a good performance. Thus ，just early to bed and exercise regularly.Moreover ，I feel that you can be more confident with yourself and never lose heart on accout of an occasional failure.Last but not the laest ，I suggest that you clearly analyze what subject you are weak at and do well in.Then focus on the weakness while make your strength to a higher level.
Perhaps these suggestions is not worth much ，but I truly expect you can recover from this failure.
I am looking forward to seeing your confident smile.
Last Sunday, I went to do some reading in your library.
But I find some problems in the library.First,A lot of people want to look books what was new.but, I can't find new books in the library.And second,the book in the bookshelfs where was in disorder.you should clear it.Third,there is a light what is bad in a reading room.Please repair it.The last,It is a big problem.As we know,the library is quiet.but,some administrators chetting each other when they worked.It was impolite for readers.
So, for the sake of readers, I suggest that you change all these mentioned as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Liming,
I am so delighted that you turn to me when coming across some difficulties .
As a proverb goes “failure is the mother of success”. Therefore，this failure is not on behalf of anything but helps to gain more valuble experience to make you do do better next time. So my opinions are as follows.
Above all ，according to your study habit ，I sincerely point it out that it does harm to you health if you chronically stay up late while a strong body demonstrtes a good performance. Thus ，just early to bed and exercise regularly.Moreover ，I feel that you can be more confident with yourself and never lose heart on accout of an occasional failure.Last but not the laest ，I suggest that you clearly analyze what subject you are weak at and do well in.Then focus on the weakness while make your strength to a higher level.
Perhaps these suggestions is not worth much ，but I truly expect you can recover from this failure.
I am looking forward to seeing your confident smile.
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第1个回答 2012-07-24
每本练习册里都有各种类型的作文，而且很多范文都不错；试卷里也有，网上的乱七八糟，不可靠。
