请各位英语高手帮我找找翻译的错误,或者有什么更好的表达,高级语句也行

Today is my first time to keep a diary in English, I will try my best to keep it in English and insist on keeping it everyday.Why i want to keep a diary?hehe.There are some reasons.First, i want to improve my written English and warn me to study more and play less computer games. Furthermore ,I would like to wirte down what happen to me everyday,which i can taste it in the future ,also share it with somebody one day.At last ,also the most important , I think it can warn me to be a good person which i wanna to be but sometimes i can't control myself. I will spare no effort to be a helpful man .So boring today,we have the political party 's lessons all day.I originally don't want to attend class in afternoon because I seldom make contributions before ,no the cadre of class,and don't join in student party,which leads to I have no strength to compete with others.Nevertheless,I considered that my roommates all wanted to go to class and if I have a absence,it mean that I have no opportunities to join in it anymore in this university,so I follow them to go to class.but I took a math book to study and to finish my homeworks .But I am likely to exit.Today,i make a decision to sign up big examination for self-culture,which I don't want to tell my parents because I am afraid that I will disappoint my parents again.But I will try my best to study and I hope i can pass it to please my parents and also benifit my future.Peculiarly,a woman in my class,she never look at me when she says hello to me and when i talk about her dear in qq,she will ignore me.Yesterday night I also say something about her dear,she ignore me again,i also ignore she.I think she won't say hello to me because every time she ignore me ,i would make an apology to her.But this time I didn't do it.To my surprise,she said hello to me tonight even she didn't look at me.hehe,a peculiar woman.今天是我第一次用英语写日记,我会尽力用英语写和坚持每天都写。为什么我想要写日记呢?呵呵,有几个原因,第一,我想提高我的英语写作水平还有提醒我多学习少玩电脑游戏。另外,我想要记下每天我发生的事,让我以后能细细地品味,也可以和某人分享,最后,也是最重要的一个,我想他能提醒我做个好人,因为很多时候我想做但是有时控制不了自己,我会尽力去做个助人为乐的人。今天很无聊啊,我们上了一天的党课,我本来下午不想去的,因为我之前很少做贡献,不是班干部,也没有加入学生会导致我根本没有实力去跟别人竞争。只会浪费我的时间。然而,我考虑到我的室友都要去,还有如果我缺席了就意味着我在这大学就再也没有机会了进党了。所以我还是跟着他们去,但我带了本数学书去那里学习还有去完成作业。但我很可能会退出。 今天,我做了一个去考大自考的决定,我没有告诉我的父母。因为我害怕我又会再让他们失望,但我会尽力去学习还有希望我能考过来使父母开心,对我以后也有好处。很奇怪,我班里的一个女的,他向我打招呼完全没看我的,还有当我在QQ上谈到他的dear,他就不理我。昨晚又是一样,他不理我,我也没回她,我想她再也不会跟我打招呼了,因为每次他不理我,我都会向他道歉,可这次我没有,令我惊奇的是,他今晚居然有跟我打招呼尽管他没看我。呵呵,一个奇怪的女人。

今天是我第一次用英语记日记,我将尽我最大努力把它放在英语,坚持每天保持它为什么我要写日记吗? 赫赫.那有一些理由。首先,我想提高我的英语写作和警告我学习更多,少玩些电脑游戏。此外,我想给我下来我每天会发生什麽事,我能体会到在未来,也和大家分享一个人的日子. 最后,也是最重要的,我想它能提醒我要做一个好人,我愿意,但有时我不能控制自己。我将不遗余力地成为一个有用的人,所以无聊的今天,我们课程的政党的那一天我本来不想去上课,因为我很少会在下午之前,没有干部贡献类,不要参加大学生党员,从而导致我却没有力量去竞争不过,我认为我的室友都想去上课,如果我有一个不在的时候,就意味着我没有机会参加了这所大学,所以我跟他们去我参加了一个?.?数学书研究和完成我的作业,但我可能会退出今天,我决定签署了大检查,文化我不想告诉父母,因为我怕会辜负我的父母了但是我真的会努力学习,我希望我能通过请我的父母和我的未来效益特有的在我的课上,有一个女人,她从不时看着我的眼睛,她向我打招呼谈论她亲爱的在qq,她会不理我昨天晚上我也说说她亲爱的,她不理我了,我也不管她我认为她不会说喂我,因为每次她不理我了,我就向她道歉但这一次我没有令我惊奇的是,她招呼我今晚,连她不敢看,我.赫赫独特的女性。
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第1个回答  2010-11-28
Today is my first time to write diary in English, I will try to use English to write and insist everyday to write. Why do I want to write a diary? Ha ha, there are several reasons, first, I want to improve my English writing and remind me learn more less playing computer games. In addition, I want to write down every day I happened, let I later can pry taste, can also share with someone, finally, also is one of the most important, I think he can remind me to be a good person, because many times, I want to do but sometimes can't control myself, I will try my best to do a good deed. Today very wearily, we are on the day of DangKe, originally I afternoon don't want to go, because I rarely do contribution, not before class cadre, also did not join student cause me to no strength to compete with others. Will only waste my time. However, I consider my roommates are to go, and if I missed the means that I am in this university had no chance into the party. So I still follow them to go, but I took this math book go there to study and to finish our homework. But I'm likely to quit. Today, I made a big decision to exam taken an examination of oneself, I didn't tell my parents. Because I was afraid I met again let them down, but I'll do my best to learn and hope I can test come over to enable parents happy, also good for my future. Strange, I class a woman, he greeted me completely didn't see me, and when I'm on the QQ spoke of his dear, he ignores me. Last night, another, he ignored me, I didn't also the back to her, I think she would never say
第2个回答  2010-11-28
hehe?没有这个词吧?;
warn myself to do sth;
what happened就可以了,去掉to me;
At last ,also the most important 改为last but not the least;
I originally don't want~~将放在句首originally本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答  2010-11-28
warn me 应该是warn myself
play less computer games 应该是 play fewer 因为 game 是可数的
would like to wirte 拼错了
somebody 改成 someone
第4个回答  2010-11-28
太多了吧

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