各位考官下午好，我叫黄牧豪，我来自于甘肃天水，今年19岁，可能很多人不知道我的家乡，但那儿的确很美丽，特别是那的气候，四季如春，很适合居住，并且有很多很有名的小吃特产，比如呱呱，浆水面等等，我为什么来这个学校，选择出国呢，我认为国外的很多教育理念比较先进，而且富有挑战，我喜欢挑战新鲜事物，我觉得可以让我进步，让我的人生很完整。在问到我出国有什么优势的话，我觉得我最大的优势就是对于接受新鲜事物的那颗心，我相信我的大学4年会很完整且很有意义，这就是我今天的自我陈述，谢谢大家
如果哪里我写的不好不通顺求适当修改，以简单清楚的自我陈述为主，急用，明天开始就要背，谢谢了
Honorable judges,
Good afternoon! My name is Huang Muhao, 19 years old. I come from Tian Shui, Gan Su Province. You may not know about my hometown, it is really a beautiful place to live in with its enjoyable climate which is like spring all year round. Moreover, there are many famous and unique local dishes such as Gua Gua, Jiang Shui noodles and so on. Today, why I choose to be here and go abroad for my further education is that I want to challenge myself and I'm looking forward to receiving this once-in-a-life opportunity to get a different foreign education . I belive this will complete and enrich my life and what's more, I could improve myself. If you ask me what advantages I have to go abroad, I would like to say: well, personally, my greatest advantage is that I'm willing to acquire new knowledge and learn new things by my heart, and I believe I'm going to make my 4-college-year more meaningful and more beautiful. So, this is my presentation and why I stand here, thank you for your time!
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Good afternoon! My name is Huang Muhao, 19 years old. I come from Tian Shui, Gan Su Province. You may not know about my hometown, it is really a beautiful place to live in with its enjoyable climate which is like spring all year round. Moreover, there are many famous and unique local dishes such as Gua Gua, Jiang Shui noodles and so on. Today, why I choose to be here and go abroad for my further education is that I want to challenge myself and I'm looking forward to receiving this once-in-a-life opportunity to get a different foreign education . I belive this will complete and enrich my life and what's more, I could improve myself. If you ask me what advantages I have to go abroad, I would like to say: well, personally, my greatest advantage is that I'm willing to acquire new knowledge and learn new things by my heart, and I believe I'm going to make my 4-college-year more meaningful and more beautiful. So, this is my presentation and why I stand here, thank you for your time!
以上内容稍作了润色，根据英语的习惯稍作了调整和修改，如有不妥，再追问。
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第1个回答 2015-08-01
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