Dear paul
As is mentioned in your last letter, you are looking forward to visiting the 2010EXPO in shanghai and hope that i can tindan apartent for you.
Not let me give you a brief introduction to one of them. the one i think suitabie has an are a of 82 square meters with one living room and two be droomsBing on the 12th fioor and located on the Huangpu River it has a good view over the scenery. aiso it of fers you a convenient transportaion -only 20 minutes ride from the EXPO centre. more importantly it is luxuriously decourated with individual kitchen and toilet. what appeals to memast is its clearness and brigh tness as well asits beautifl surroundings. you can rent it by day ovby month with the cost of 80yuan each day or 1600yuan per month. i hope it suits you and you will enjoy it.
lokkong for ward to your earil arrival.
第二篇
Good morning, ladies and ladies and gentlemen.
my name is lihua .i have the honor of beingyour guide. id like togive you a brief in troducion toour field trip today.
First well start at 8:30am form school and get to the foot of the mountain at about 9:00am. then well clinbthe mounteain itlltake about one hour to reach the top where stand some temetemples we are free tolookaround the temples form 10:00am to 12:00am. when well have lunch there at ter ashort break well godown the other side of the montain at 2:00pm we plan toreach the riversideat about 3:00pm. well goon with our trip down the river by boat and enjoy the scenery finally well be boat at school at about 5:00pm.
thats all for todays arrang ement. i wish you all a wonder ful day. thanks.
抱歉。，第一篇有些地方打错了，现在改正了请翻译这篇。
Dear paul.
As is mentioned in your last letter, you are looking forward to visiting the 2010EXPO in shanghai and hope that i can tindan apartent for you.
Now let me give you abrief introduction todone of them the one i think suitabie has an area of 82 square meters Being on the 12th floor a good view over the scenery also it offers youa conveniet transportation -oniy 20minutes ride from the EXPO centre. more importantly kitchen and toilet what appeals to me most is its clearness and brightness as well as its beautiful surroundings you can rentit by day or 1600yuan per month i hope it suits you and you will enjoy it .
looking forward to your eariy arrival.
你在上一封来信中提到，你期望能够来上海参观2010世博会，同时希望我能替你安排行程。（那几个单词查不到意思，但是上下文就是这个意思。还有我不知道你要直接翻译还是意译，所以我两者都有，挎号里的是解释和代之或者辅助）
现在让我先将行程中的一个环节（住宿）做个简单的介绍。我认为它很合适是因为这套房的寝室有82个平方，在12楼可以有很好的视野看风景，而且还处于非常便捷的交通位置。它具离世博园中心只有20分钟的车程，更重要的一点，也是最吸引我的是（它配备的）厨房和厕所和它（代之厨房和厕所）漂亮的环境一样干净和明亮，你可以日租，也可以花费1600元月租，我希望这会适合你，并且你也喜欢这里。
期待你的早日到来。
第二篇：
女士们，先生们，早上好！
我叫李华，很高兴能担任你们的导游，我想先为今天的行程做个简单的介绍。
首先，早上8：30我们将从学校出发，大概是9:00左右到达山脚下，然后我们开始爬山，大概需要花费一个小时到达建有一些寺庙的山顶部，我们从10:00到12：00自由参观寺庙，在这个期间我们将在那吃午饭（后面单词没看到，when引导的是前面半句的时间状语，还是后面的句子？？）。稍作休息，我们将在下午两点从山的另一边下山。我们计划3:00 左右到达河边，然后继续我们的旅程，乘船欣赏两岸的风景，最后我们乘船回到学校的时间大约是5:00。
这就是今天的所有安排，愿大家度过愉快的一天，谢谢！
在你过去是提到的信,你都很期待的2010EXPO在上海,并且希望我能tindan apartent给你。
现在让我给你们介绍他们的abrief todone我认为suitabie占地82平方米,保持在12楼一个好的视野的,它提供给它的风景也-oniy youa乘车为主,交通centre.骑到世博更重要的是厨房和卫生间最吸引我的大多数是其清晰和亮度以及它的美丽的环境中,你可以rentit每月白天或1600yuan我希望它适合你,你就会喜欢它。
eariy期待着您的到来。
早上好,女士们,女士们,先生们。
我的名字是丽华,我荣幸guide. beingyour给予你们一些我想今天在troducion寻找的实地考察旅行。
早上八点半便先出发的好学校,得到形式到山脚下就好clinbthe大约在9:00am. mounteain itlltake大约一个小时到达山顶的地方我们可以自由的一些temetemples站立于tolookaround庙宇形式在这里吃午饭12:00am.法门ashort断井godown在山上玩得很高兴的另一边的)下午二时我们计划好riversideat知关于3:00pm.笨蛋与我们沿河坐船旅行,欣赏风景的人最后是大约在下午5点船在学校。
这一切为当天的发等。我祝愿你们都有一个不知道一天成功,谢谢。
你上一封来信中说到，你期望能够来上海参观2010世博会，同时希望我能……
现在我先将其中的一个做个简单的介绍，
（句子的单词很多被打乱了，而且有错的，很麻烦哦）
第二篇：
女士们，先生们，早上好！
我叫李华，很高兴能成为你们的导游，我想先为今天的行程做个简单的介绍。
首先，早上8：30我们将从学校出发，到达山脚下大概是9:00，然后我们开始爬山，到达山顶大约需要1小时，那里有一些寺庙，从10:00到12：00，我们有2个小时时间游览寺庙，然后吃午饭。饭后，稍作休息，我们将从山的另一边下山，到达山脚大概下午2:00。我们计划3:00 到达河边，然后乘船一边漂流一边欣赏美丽的风景，最后我们乘船到达学校的时间大约是5:00。
这就是今天的主要安排，愿大家度过愉快的一天，谢谢！本回答被网友采纳
As is mentioned in your last letter, you are looking forward to visiting the 2010EXPO in shanghai and hope that i can tindan apartent for you.
Not let me give you a brief introduction to one of them. the one i think suitabie has an are a of 82 square meters with one living room and two be droomsBing on the 12th fioor and located on the Huangpu River it has a good view over the scenery. aiso it of fers you a convenient transportaion -only 20 minutes ride from the EXPO centre. more importantly it is luxuriously decourated with individual kitchen and toilet. what appeals to memast is its clearness and brigh tness as well asits beautifl surroundings. you can rent it by day ovby month with the cost of 80yuan each day or 1600yuan per month. i hope it suits you and you will enjoy it.
lokkong for ward to your earil arrival.
第二篇
Good morning, ladies and ladies and gentlemen.
my name is lihua .i have the honor of beingyour guide. id like togive you a brief in troducion toour field trip today.
First well start at 8:30am form school and get to the foot of the mountain at about 9:00am. then well clinbthe mounteain itlltake about one hour to reach the top where stand some temetemples we are free tolookaround the temples form 10:00am to 12:00am. when well have lunch there at ter ashort break well godown the other side of the montain at 2:00pm we plan toreach the riversideat about 3:00pm. well goon with our trip down the river by boat and enjoy the scenery finally well be boat at school at about 5:00pm.
thats all for todays arrang ement. i wish you all a wonder ful day. thanks.问题补充：
抱歉。，第一篇有些地方打错了，现在改正了请翻译这篇。
Dear paul.
As is mentioned in your last letter, you are looking forward to visiting the 2010EXPO in shanghai and hope that i can tindan apartent for you.
Now let me give you abrief introduction todone of them the one i think suitabie has an area of 82 square meters Being on the 12th floor a good view over the scenery also it offers youa conveniet transportation -oniy 20minutes ride from the EXPO centre. more importantly kitchen and toilet what appeals to me most is its clearness and brightness as well as its beautiful surroundings you can rentit by day or 1600yuan per month i hope it suits you and you will enjoy it .
looking forward to your eariy arrival.
Dear paul.
As is mentioned in your last letter, you are looking forward to visiting the 2010EXPO in shanghai and hope that i can tindan apartent for you.
Now let me give you abrief introduction todone of them the one i think suitabie has an area of 82 square meters Being on the 12th floor a good view over the scenery also it offers youa conveniet transportation -oniy 20minutes ride from the EXPO centre. more importantly kitchen and toilet what appeals to me most is its clearness and brightness as well as its beautiful surroundings you can rentit by day or 1600yuan per month i hope it suits you and you will enjoy it .
looking forward to your eariy arrival.
