（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）
中文部分：
最近在我上发生了很多事情，很多我付出了很多心血和努力的事，最后却没有得到好的结果。这让我非常的失望甚至是有一点绝望。所以听了你的故事很有感触。我愿意相信一切都会好起来的，只是真的希望那一天早一点到来。同样，也希望你的生活一切顺利。
我的翻译：
Actually, there a lot of terrible things happen on me recently. A lot of things which I worked very hard on it but did not get a good result. This makes me not only sad but also despair. That's why I'm so touching when I hear your story. I try to believe everything will be fine and I truly hope it could come soon. I also hope everything on you is OK.
actually换成recently，后面的recently删掉
there后面加have been
happen on换成happen to
下一句中的a lot of 冗余去掉
worked very hard on it把那个it删掉
a good result换成good results
This makes me not only sad but also despair.
改成This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair
touching换成touched，hear换成heard
I try to believe
改成I'd like to believe
hope后面改成that day could come sooner
最后一句改成same here，I wish everything‘s going on fine with you too追问
Recently, there have been a lot of terrible things happen to me. Things which I worked very hard on but did not get good results. This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair. That's why I'm so touched when I heard your story. I'd like to believe everything will be fine and I truly hope that day could come sooner. Same here，I wish everything's going on fine with you too.
追答差不多了
希望采纳！
