托福作文求批改~~这篇思路感觉很乱。。上来求助一下大家。

people are too busy doing different things, they can do few things well
Nowadays, in this competitive society , life pace is so fast. People are always on the go. They have so many things to handle, which can take them much time and energy. For example , work ,study and other annoying life chores. Thus some argue that, people can do few things well since they are fully occupied by different things. That’s an opinion which I can’t consent to. I also have my reasons.

To start , I think good planning and organizing ahead of the actually implementing can contribute to the success of doing many things. We all know that good plans enable us to see clearly what we are going to face with and what choice should we make at a certain time. So we can make enough preparations before we start doing things. And we can also be calm and conscious enough to do the right things when we are confronted with emergencies. Take today’s office ladies as examples. They have to balance their work and their families. If they don’t have a set schedule when they start a brand new day ,they will certainly go crazy because they can easily mess up all the things in their life.

Then I would say that the combination of work and relaxation also helps to deal with things well. Since people’s time and vigour is limited ,with too many different things around ,they may usually be put under a lot of pressure. In order to work and handle those tough things ,people should take time to relax themselves. Say, going out for a walk , watching TV with family members. After that, they will feel more energetic and easier to concentrate when they get back to their assignments. That can certainly improve their efficiency and save their time, as well as make few mistakes. So people may be able to finish as many things as they can at a limited time , and also finish them with good qualities.

The last things I want to talk about is the importance of cooperation. “together ,individuals make a difference.” We’ve all heard about this old saying. So when we have many things to do at the same time. We should not hesitate to collaborate with others. Since everyone’s knowledge is limited , sometimes we are not able to handle something that is bothering us. However, if at this time others who are adept at this tricky thing is willing to collaborate with us, we can be released from the trouble and the results can turn out better.

Due to the reasons I listed above ,we can safely come to a conclusion that people can do many things well even if they have many things to do ,as long as they can plan well, relax properly and cooperate with others.

题目是什么

第一句 和 最后一句 完全意思完全相反追问

题目是第一行。。。。然后我是反对这一观点的。
我没排版好,所以你觉得最后一句和第一句完全相反。。。。

追答

Nowadays, in this highly competitive world , the pace of life is so fast that people are always on the go. They have to handle too many things such as work ,study and other annoying living chores, which can take them a great deal of time and energy. some argue that people can do few things well since they are fully occupied by various things. That’s an opinion to which I can’t consent. here are my reasons.
first of all , I think that good planning and organizing ahead of the actual implementing can contribute to the success of many things. We all know that good plans enable us to see clearly what we are going to face with and what choice should we make at a certain time. So we can make enough preparations before we start. And we can also be calm and conscious enough to do the right things when we are confronted with emergencies. Take today’s office ladies as an example. They have to balance between their work and their family life. If they don’t have a set schedule when they start a brand new day ,they will certainly go crazy as they can easily mess the day up

Secondly, I would say that the good combination of work and relaxation also helps to deal with things well. Since time and vigour are limited , one, with too many different things on his hand, may usually be put under tremendous pressure. In order to work those tough things out ,he should take time to relax ,say, going out for a walk or watching TV with family members. A good relaxation will make him feel more energetic so that is become easier for him to concentrate when he gets back to their assignments. That can certainly improve his efficiency and save his time, in the meantime making fewer mistakes. one may be able to achieve as many things as they can within the limited time , and. more probably, with good qualities. 其余在你主页上留言了

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