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Firstly,the best thing about fast food is being fast. Now everyone lives a busy life so time is the most valuable thing to us all.Fast food offers a most efficient way to eat.You will waste no time in waiting or choosing.Secondlu,fast food restaurants provide us with a good environment for entertainment and study.Friends come here,chatting or playing cards;students come here,reading books or doing homework,and meanwhile you can enjoy a bag of chips and a bottle of cola which will bring more pleasure.Thirdly, youngsters can even find good opportunities of working practice in some fast food restaurants.Working experience help them understand the society better and improve their communicating skills.
In many ways,we beefit a lot from the fast food business.Therefore,I think it helpful and important to our life.
2.With the human resource market getting competitive,more and more students have sensed the tense atmosphere and felt the necessity of learning more. They are no longer satisfied with what they have learnt at school.They are eager to improve their academic performances and absorb more nutrition to qualify themselves to compete with others.Parents also place all their hopes on children,wishing them a bright future.
Accordingly,a number of tutorial centres which guarantee a good mark mushroomed.They just meet the needs of those students,who poured into the place trgardless of whether they need to do so,some of whom just follow the trend without doing any detective work.As a result,some who have little self-discipline waste time sleeping and reading comics during the lessons.Somer who can't arrange their time properly and fit it into their busy schedule don't make progress they have expected.
The endless and tiring study without any recreation even affect some students' health and lead to the other side of the coin.
Each coin has two sides.We should work out a practical way to balance it.追问
能不能再简单一点，thanks
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追答1、 I spent this summer vacation in quite a different way. I used to run about every day in previous summer vacations,this summer vacation I simply could not afford to do so. I would soon be in the last year of my high-school education would after graduation be up against the college entrance examinations. Though those examinations were still a year away, I had to start early to make myself well prepared by reviewing all those things I had learned at school this summer vacation was the ideal time for me to do this.
At first I was rather dismayed at the thought of this,8ttt8.comlater I thought it was better this way because by working hard this summer I could count on endless happy summers to come. With this in mind I then set to work like anything and occasionally went out for a change or did some physical. I was not at all bored by this kind of life, for I was sustained by a hope.
2、There are three people in my family. Of course I am the only child. My father is a doctor. He is forty years old. He is tall and thin with a pair of glasses on his small nose. He works hard and he is patient,kind and generous. So all of his patients love him very much. My mother is a teacher. She has long curly hair. She is slim and beautiful. She goes to work by bike because she thinks it's a good way of exercising. I am a middle school student. I am good at English and maths. I work so hard that I am a top student in my class. My parents and I all like traveling and reading. During our holiday, we often go to the beach in summer and go skating or skiing in winter. I think I have a happy family.
这两篇可以吗？
There is a cat in our English school.Its name is Zhaocai.It is fat and very lovely.It has pointy ears,round eyes,white claws, and short but soft fur.It likes to keep itself clean by licking its fur.Zhaocai likes eating fish and meat.
One day,I played a ball with my friend,but the ball fell down on the floor.Zhaocai saw the ball and ran to catch it.We saw it and laughed.Then we played with Zhaocai together. We were all very happy.We like zhaocai very much，because It is very cute and has brought us hap－piness.
小猫——招财
我们学校有一只猫，它的名字叫做招财。它很胖并且很可爱。它有尖尖的耳朵，圆圆的眼睛，白色的爪子和短而软的毛,它靠舔自己的毛让自己保持干净。招财喜欢吃鱼和肉。
一天，我和朋友们在玩一个球，但是球掉到了地上。招财看到了它就跑过去把球抓住。我们看着它，笑了起来。然后我们就和它一起玩了起来。大家都很高兴。
我们非常喜欢招财因为它很可爱，而且为我们带来了快乐。
A NiceDay
Today is Monday.It is a nice day. In the morning, we had four classes，we had Chinese at 8:00o'clock. We had maths at8:50o'clock.we had English at9:30o'clock and Moral Education at10:30.
In the afternoon，we had P.E at2:30,I really like P.E very much.oh,we had handwriting class on3:20.
I like the day very much.
It is a nice day and a happy day!
美好的一天
今天是星期一，美好的一天。早上，我有4节课，8：00是语文课，8：50是数学课，9：30是英语课，10：30是思想教育课。
下午，2：30是体育课，我非常喜欢体育课。哦，在3：20我们还有写字课。
我非常喜欢这一天。
这是美好和快乐的一天！追问
说了要200字以上的
追答我看到你后边写‘一定要200字’。。。
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it en211 to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.”
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn’t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
还有一篇，提交不了，超过限定字数，你追问一下，我再发给你。
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追答How to Live A Better Life
When we think of change live for better, we often think about a new job, new house, a new car, a new girl friend or boy friend. These are either material things or something from outside of us. Actually, the best things in life are within us. Even we are born in circumstances that we have no control, how we act and how our attitude to life is mattered. We are the masters of our own destiny. If you want to change you life for better, you can do it any time.
In my opinion, there are many ways to make life better. Here I list a few. First, take a good look of yourself. Not to desire more material things. Look into your self from a distance and trying to recognise you are a unique individual and life for a good purpose. Therefore you can see yourself in harmony with the universe.
Second, do something for others. You have to realise you are not isolated in the world. You have family and friends. Why not going out with your family? Why not hold a party for friends? Why not do some charity work? Interact more with people, you give something and get returns, which is very rewarding.
Furthermore, take up some activities. Try to develop a hobby. Why not go to a concert, or art class? Why not learn Yoga, or start a blog? Do something creative that will give you a lot of pleasure and sense of satisfactory
