如题所述
写的不错，第一行has ， 倒数第二行 brings，最后一句不地道，改成 better
范文 With the development of the computer technology and the internet,we have got a new media to know the outside world.And our life is greatly changed with it.On the internet,you can get both the domestic news and the international news as well.For our daily communication, you can send E-mails to your friends and the other people.Of course,you can study whatever you like on the internet,such as, English and other subjects.Meanwhile,you can appreciate music,sports and enjoy the video games.Recently,more and more people,especially young people,are interested in shopping online.Anyway,internet is changing our style of life and the way of thinking as well.追问
范文 With the development of the computer technology and the internet,we have got a new media to know the outside world.And our life is greatly changed with it.On the internet,you can get both the domestic news and the international news as well.For our daily communication, you can send E-mails to your friends and the other people.Of course,you can study whatever you like on the internet,such as, English and other subjects.Meanwhile,you can appreciate music,sports and enjoy the video games.Recently,more and more people,especially young people,are interested in shopping online.Anyway,internet is changing our style of life and the way of thinking as well.追问
为什么第一行用has ？
追答compuer第三人称单数
追问恩恩，那有没有语法上的错误？
第五行的problem要不要加s？
一会采纳你
追答最好加上s， various problems比较好
追问谢谢哦
25分你给这篇作文多少分？
追答18
追问为什么？
我每次作文分都很低，我非常的想知道我哪里有问题
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