我最喜欢的奥运会比赛项目是女子排球,我对排球很感兴趣,而且我也经常玩.比赛的结果是中国队得了铜牌,我认为这是实力的体现,如果中国在运动技术上没有很大的创新,只靠精神,中国很难得到金牌.
我的翻译: My favorite sport is women volleyball .i am very interested in volleyball game and i often play with it.
The result of match is china team getting a medal. i think it is a show of comprehensive power. if we do not create enough sport skills , only by spirit, we can not got a gold medal.
帮你改改：
My favorite sport is women's volleyball. I'm very interested in volleyball, and I play it often. China got the Bronze in this Olympic Game. I think this showcases China's abilities. If China does not make a breakthrough in playing this game, only rely on spirit, it would be very hard for us to win the Gold.
我改的地方：女士排球 - 要用 women's （女的）
金牌 - Gold ; 铜牌 - Bronze
展现，体现 - showcase
not make a breakthrough - 没有很大的突破 （含义：没有很大的创新）
My favorite sport is women's volleyball. I'm very interested in volleyball, and I play it often. China got the Bronze in this Olympic Game. I think this showcases China's abilities. If China does not make a breakthrough in playing this game, only rely on spirit, it would be very hard for us to win the Gold.
我改的地方：女士排球 - 要用 women's （女的）
金牌 - Gold ; 铜牌 - Bronze
展现，体现 - showcase
not make a breakthrough - 没有很大的突破 （含义：没有很大的创新）
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第1个回答 2008-09-03
你的翻译还不错.在此基础上小改一下即可.My favorite sport is female volleyball .i am very interested in volleyball game and i often play with it.
The result of match is china team getting a cupreous
medal. i think it is a show of comprehensive power. if we do not create enough sport skills , only do it by spirit, we can not get a golden medal.
The result of match is china team getting a cupreous
medal. i think it is a show of comprehensive power. if we do not create enough sport skills , only do it by spirit, we can not get a golden medal.
第2个回答 2008-09-03
I most like Olympic Games event is the female volleyball, I am interested very much to the volleyball, moreover I also frequently play. Competition's result was the Chinese team bronze medal, I thought that this was strength manifestation, if China in the movement technology the very big innovation, has not depended on the spirit only, China was very difficult to obtain the gold medal.
第3个回答 2008-09-03
My favorite Olympic sport is women's volleyball, I am very interested in volleyball, and I often play. Competition is the result of the Chinese team won the bronze medal, I think this is the embodiment of strength, if China does not technically great movement The innovation, rely on the spirit of the Chinese difficult to get the gold medal.
