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写作思路:开头段是非常重要的,一定要语言简练,切记一定要直接切入主题(有些同学在写开头段时迟迟不切入主题,会影响改卷老师对这篇作文的印象,或许还会认为你写的跑题),而且开头段一般不进行具体的论述。
正文:
Elephant is the largest animal on land today. It weights some ninety kilograms and is about one metre high when born. When it is 12 years old, it studs over three meters and does not grow any more.
大象是陆地上最大的动物。它生下来体重约90公斤,身高约1米。到12岁时,象就不再长了,身高3米多。
Elephant is usually grey in color, having a long trunk with large ivory tusks protruding from each side of its mouth. Usually moving in groups and caring for each other, Elephant is known to be a very and gentle creature.
大象通常是灰色的,有长鼻子,大大的象牙从嘴的两侧伸出。大象通常喜欢集体行动,彼此之间相互照顾。众所周知大象是性情温和的动物。
For many years people have used the strength of these poweful animals to move trees and heavy logs. Elephant has been and is a vital tool for people to do many things that would normally be impossible.
很多年来,人们利用大象拖木,举圆木。大象一直是人们做许多事物的'重要工具,特别是一些人力不能做的事情。
Elephant is and will continue to be one of the greatest creatures man has ever come into contact with. Its size. beauty, and power willforever be useful to man.so we must protect them
很多年来,人们利用大象拖木,举圆木。大象一直是人们做许多事物的'重要工具,特别是一些人力不能做的事情。
例文
Dear WWF,
I am writing to express my concerns about the protection of elephants. As we all know, elephants are one of the most magnificent creatures on earth and play an essential role in maintaining ecological balance. However, their populations have been declining in recent years due to various human activities such as poaching and habitat destruction.
Therefore, I urge you to take action to protect these beautiful animals. One way to do this is by raising public awareness of the importance of elephant conservation. This can be achieved through education programs and media campaigns, which can educate people on the devastating effects of elephant poaching and encourage them to take action.
Additionally, it is crucial to collaborate with governments, organizations, and local communities in conservation efforts. By promoting sustainable tourism and livelihoods for local people, we can help reduce the demand for ivory and protect elephant habitats.
In conclusion, I hope that WWF will continue to work tirelessly to protect elephants and preserve their habitats. Every effort counts, and together, we can make a difference in saving these magnificent animals.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
重点词汇:
1. Magnificent (adj.) - 壮丽的,宏伟的
2. Ecological balance (n.) - 生态平衡
3. Declining (adj.) - 衰退的,下降的
4. Poaching (n.) - 盗猎,偷猎
5. Habitat destruction (n.) - 栖息地破坏
6. Raise awareness (phr.) - 提高意识
7. Education programs (n.) - 教育项目
8. Media campaigns (n.) - 媒体宣传活动
9. Collaboration (n.) - 合作
10. Sustainable tourism (n.) - 可持续旅游
11. Livelihoods (n.) - 生计,谋生之道
12. Ivory (n.) - 象牙
例句:
1. The Grand Canyon is a magnificent natural wonder and attracts millions of tourists every year.
(大峡谷是一个壮丽的自然奇观,每年吸引着数百万游客。)
2. The ecological balance in the forest has been disturbed by illegal logging and hunting.
(非法砍伐和捕猎扰乱了森林的生态平衡。)
3. The number of wild tigers has been declining, mainly due to poaching for their fur and bones.
(野生老虎数量一直在下降,主要是由于为了它们的皮毛和骨头而进行盗猎。)
4. Many animals are endangered because of habitat destruction caused by human activities like deforestation and urbanization.
(许多动物因为人类活动导致的森林砍伐和城市化等栖息地破坏而处于濒危状态。)
5. Public campaigns can contribute significantly to raising awareness about the importance of environmental protection.
(公共宣传活动可以对提高人们对环境保护重要性的认识有很大的贡献。)