我们英语老师说了,要国籍,要工作,要杰出点.还要英文的.
比如英语书上的米开朗基罗,有具体事例,有具体成功过程与原因.工作是什么,杰出点在哪里.
拜托辣,详细一点.就当造福全高一学生吧!
没说仔细,是除了米开朗基罗的.
No Sweet without Sweat
"No sweet without sweat" is an old saying which was coneluded by ancient people from their daily experiences.
In ancient times, some peasants transplanted rice seedlings,gathered in wheat and spread manure in the shining sun, in the pouring rain and in the fierce wind. Sweat wet through their clothes and dropped from their forehead. They stepped out of their home to the field carrying on a hoe on their shoulders with the moon overhead giving off dim light and went home with their exhausted bodies when the sun set day by day. When autumn,the harvest season came, smiles appeared on their black and wrinkly faces which were caused by the strong sunshine and hard work while gazing at the large fields of ripe crops swaying in the breeze. How fine! In contrast, other peasants who lay in their houses with comfort escaping the poor weather conditions outside only to find nothing in their storehouses while those hard working peasants' storehouses were filled with golden wheat and other grain. Then, they learned the meaning of the saying "No sweet without sweat". It may be the origin of the proverb.
But the proverb is also true in modern times. With the rolling wheel of the history it has been proved that the saying can also be applied to many aspects of social matters in any times of the history. Without constant practice, how can one become a planist and win the respect and praise from all over the world? Without hard training, how can an athlete win the gold medal in the international games where cruel competitions exit all the time?Without sweat paid off, how can you climb up the top of the mountain and look over the boundless beautiful scene?
Have you learned the saying by Edison that 1% genius plus 99% hard work make success? Maybe you are born with genius just like Mozart, but without sweat you also can not get sweet.It is undoubted that Mozart had the amazing genius of composing. As a matter of fact, what were really handed down were not what he wrote by means of his genius but by his huge amount of effort. When you listen to his great art works, you will be deeply moved. It's best to have genius at birth while it's worst to rely on it entirely and pay no effort.
Even if you are considered less intelligent than others, you can obtain sweet through sweat as well. Take Edison as an example. Once he was considered little mind and had little education but at last he became the inventor of the lamp which greatly improved civilization of human beings. He had to do several thousand of experiments in order to find out a suitable metal which was resistant to high temperatures and oxidation for the sake of making a lamp which could be long used. He succeeded with his large amount of sweat. If he had given up half way and if he had grudged his sweat, he would only have been a mediocre person.
In a success, genius can' t replace sweat. Sweet mostly comes from sweat rather than genius. The saying "No sweat no sweet" will be the permanent golden proverb of human beings.
简 评
本文题目为“没有汗水就没有甜美”(No sweet without sweat)。这是一个古谚，简洁易懂。作者围绕此主题，从古今中外各方面进行了分析。首先，他描述了古代农民耕种的两种结果：辛勤耕耘、挥汗如雨则仓康充实；不舍得流汗、不愿劳动则颗粒无收。描写生动，让人体会深刻。作者认为这同样适用于现代。钢琴家、运动员、登山者要成功必须付出汗水。作者还举了两个不同的成功事例：爱迪生、莫扎特。他们虽一个天资聪颖，一个生来鲁钝，但功事例：爱迪生、莫扎特。他们虽一个天资聪颖，一个生来鲁钝，但其成功都基于共同的原因：后天的勤奋。这验证了爱迪生的名言：成功是99％的汗水加l％的天才。作者用一句话对此做了精辟的总结：生具天分当然最好，但最糟的是：完全依赖天分而不付出劳动。通过以上有理有据的分析，作者成功地总结出：成功的甜美主要来自于辛勤的汗水，而非天分。
作者驾驭语言的能力较强，句子结构多样比，有力地表明了观点，是一篇佳文。
"No sweet without sweat" is an old saying which was coneluded by ancient people from their daily experiences.
In ancient times, some peasants transplanted rice seedlings,gathered in wheat and spread manure in the shining sun, in the pouring rain and in the fierce wind. Sweat wet through their clothes and dropped from their forehead. They stepped out of their home to the field carrying on a hoe on their shoulders with the moon overhead giving off dim light and went home with their exhausted bodies when the sun set day by day. When autumn,the harvest season came, smiles appeared on their black and wrinkly faces which were caused by the strong sunshine and hard work while gazing at the large fields of ripe crops swaying in the breeze. How fine! In contrast, other peasants who lay in their houses with comfort escaping the poor weather conditions outside only to find nothing in their storehouses while those hard working peasants' storehouses were filled with golden wheat and other grain. Then, they learned the meaning of the saying "No sweet without sweat". It may be the origin of the proverb.
But the proverb is also true in modern times. With the rolling wheel of the history it has been proved that the saying can also be applied to many aspects of social matters in any times of the history. Without constant practice, how can one become a planist and win the respect and praise from all over the world? Without hard training, how can an athlete win the gold medal in the international games where cruel competitions exit all the time?Without sweat paid off, how can you climb up the top of the mountain and look over the boundless beautiful scene?
Have you learned the saying by Edison that 1% genius plus 99% hard work make success? Maybe you are born with genius just like Mozart, but without sweat you also can not get sweet.It is undoubted that Mozart had the amazing genius of composing. As a matter of fact, what were really handed down were not what he wrote by means of his genius but by his huge amount of effort. When you listen to his great art works, you will be deeply moved. It's best to have genius at birth while it's worst to rely on it entirely and pay no effort.
Even if you are considered less intelligent than others, you can obtain sweet through sweat as well. Take Edison as an example. Once he was considered little mind and had little education but at last he became the inventor of the lamp which greatly improved civilization of human beings. He had to do several thousand of experiments in order to find out a suitable metal which was resistant to high temperatures and oxidation for the sake of making a lamp which could be long used. He succeeded with his large amount of sweat. If he had given up half way and if he had grudged his sweat, he would only have been a mediocre person.
In a success, genius can' t replace sweat. Sweet mostly comes from sweat rather than genius. The saying "No sweat no sweet" will be the permanent golden proverb of human beings.
简 评
本文题目为“没有汗水就没有甜美”(No sweet without sweat)。这是一个古谚，简洁易懂。作者围绕此主题，从古今中外各方面进行了分析。首先，他描述了古代农民耕种的两种结果：辛勤耕耘、挥汗如雨则仓康充实；不舍得流汗、不愿劳动则颗粒无收。描写生动，让人体会深刻。作者认为这同样适用于现代。钢琴家、运动员、登山者要成功必须付出汗水。作者还举了两个不同的成功事例：爱迪生、莫扎特。他们虽一个天资聪颖，一个生来鲁钝，但功事例：爱迪生、莫扎特。他们虽一个天资聪颖，一个生来鲁钝，但其成功都基于共同的原因：后天的勤奋。这验证了爱迪生的名言：成功是99％的汗水加l％的天才。作者用一句话对此做了精辟的总结：生具天分当然最好，但最糟的是：完全依赖天分而不付出劳动。通过以上有理有据的分析，作者成功地总结出：成功的甜美主要来自于辛勤的汗水，而非天分。
作者驾驭语言的能力较强，句子结构多样比，有力地表明了观点，是一篇佳文。
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Madam Curie is a French professor of physics. She was born in Poland in 1867. In 1891 she went to study in Paris University because at that time women were not admitted to universities in Poland. When she was studying in Paris, she lived a poor life, but she worked very hard. In 1895 she married Pierre Curie, and then they worked together on the research into radioactive matter. They discovered two kinds of radioactive matter----polonium and radium. In 1904 she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize for physics. In 1906 Pierre died, but Marie went on working. She received a second Nobel Prize for Chemistry in 1911. So she became the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel Prizes
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Marie and Pierre
Marie Curie was born Maria Sklodowska in Warsaw, Poland, on November 7, 1867. Her family valued education, but women were not allowed to study at the University of Warsaw. Instead, Maria saved enough money to study in Paris, France. In 1891 she entered the Sorbonne, a university in Paris. In France she began calling herself Marie.
Marie completed degrees in physics and in math within three years. She then began doing research in the laboratory of chemist Pierre Curie. Pierre was born in Paris on May 15, 1859. He and Marie married on July 25, 1895. They had two daughters, Irène and Ève. Irène became a scientist like her parents. She was born in Paris on September 12, 1897.
Their Work
Marie began studying the rays (beams of energy) given off by the element uranium. She named the unusual activity of these rays radioactivity. Pierre soon joined Marie in her research. In 1898 the Curies announced their discovery of polonium and radium, two other elements that were radioactive. In 1903 they won the Nobel prize in physics for their work. The Nobel prize is the most important award that a scientist can receive. The Curies shared the prize with Henri Becquerel, who first discovered uranium rays.
Pierre died on April 19, 1906, after being run over by a horse-drawn carriage. Marie continued their research. In 1911 she received the Nobel prize in chemistry for her many further discoveries.
Irène and Frédéric Joliot
Irène Curie began to work at her mother's side. She earned an advanced degree in physics in 1925. In 1926 Irène married Frédéric Joliot, another scientist working in her mother's laboratory. Frédéric was born in Paris on March 19, 1900. In 1934 the couple discovered that radioactivity could be made artificially. The following year they won the Nobel prize in chemistry for their work.
Marie did not live to see her daughter accept the award. Her many years of exposure to harmful radioactivity had made her very sick. She died on July 4, 1934. Irène died on March 17, 1956. Frédéric died on August 14, 1958.本回答被提问者采纳
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Marie and Pierre
Marie Curie was born Maria Sklodowska in Warsaw, Poland, on November 7, 1867. Her family valued education, but women were not allowed to study at the University of Warsaw. Instead, Maria saved enough money to study in Paris, France. In 1891 she entered the Sorbonne, a university in Paris. In France she began calling herself Marie.
Marie completed degrees in physics and in math within three years. She then began doing research in the laboratory of chemist Pierre Curie. Pierre was born in Paris on May 15, 1859. He and Marie married on July 25, 1895. They had two daughters, Irène and Ève. Irène became a scientist like her parents. She was born in Paris on September 12, 1897.
Their Work
Marie began studying the rays (beams of energy) given off by the element uranium. She named the unusual activity of these rays radioactivity. Pierre soon joined Marie in her research. In 1898 the Curies announced their discovery of polonium and radium, two other elements that were radioactive. In 1903 they won the Nobel prize in physics for their work. The Nobel prize is the most important award that a scientist can receive. The Curies shared the prize with Henri Becquerel, who first discovered uranium rays.
Pierre died on April 19, 1906, after being run over by a horse-drawn carriage. Marie continued their research. In 1911 she received the Nobel prize in chemistry for her many further discoveries.
Irène and Frédéric Joliot
Irène Curie began to work at her mother's side. She earned an advanced degree in physics in 1925. In 1926 Irène married Frédéric Joliot, another scientist working in her mother's laboratory. Frédéric was born in Paris on March 19, 1900. In 1934 the couple discovered that radioactivity could be made artificially. The following year they won the Nobel prize in chemistry for their work.
Marie did not live to see her daughter accept the award. Her many years of exposure to harmful radioactivity had made her very sick. She died on July 4, 1934. Irène died on March 17, 1956. Frédéric died on August 14, 1958.本回答被提问者采纳
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Michelangelo was an Italian Renaissance painter, sculptor, architect, poet and engineer. Despite making few forays beyond the arts, his versatility in the disciplines he took up was of such a high order that he is often considered a contender for the title of the archetypal Renaissance man, along with his rival and fellow Italian Leonardo da Vinci.
Michelangelo's output in every field during his long life was prodigious; when the sheer volume of correspondence, sketches and reminiscences that survive is also taken into account, he is the best-documented artist of the 16th century. Two of his best-known works, the Pietà and the David, were sculpted before he turned thirty. Despite his low opinion of painting, Michelangelo also created two of the most influential works in fresco in the history of Western art: the scenes from Genesis on the ceiling and The Last Judgment on the altar wall of the Sistine Chapel in Rome. Later in life he designed the dome of St. Peter's Basilica in the same city and revolutionised classical architecture with his use of the giant order of pilasters.
In a demonstration of Michelangelo's unique standing, he was the first Western artist whose biography was published while he was alive.Two biographies were published of him during his lifetime; One of them, by Giorgio Vasari, proposed that he was the pinnacle of all artistic achievement since the beginning of the Renaissance, a viewpoint that continued to have currency in art history for centuries. In his lifetime he was also often called Il Divino ("the divine one").One of the qualities most admired by his contemporaries was his terribilità, a sense of awe-inspiring grandeur, and it was the attempts of subsequent artists to imitate Michelangelo's impassioned and highly personal style that resulted in the next major movement in Western art after the High Renaissance, Mannerism.
Micheangelo was a profound perfectionist. If he found the tiniest flaw in one of his works, he considered it ruined.
Michelangelo's output in every field during his long life was prodigious; when the sheer volume of correspondence, sketches and reminiscences that survive is also taken into account, he is the best-documented artist of the 16th century. Two of his best-known works, the Pietà and the David, were sculpted before he turned thirty. Despite his low opinion of painting, Michelangelo also created two of the most influential works in fresco in the history of Western art: the scenes from Genesis on the ceiling and The Last Judgment on the altar wall of the Sistine Chapel in Rome. Later in life he designed the dome of St. Peter's Basilica in the same city and revolutionised classical architecture with his use of the giant order of pilasters.
In a demonstration of Michelangelo's unique standing, he was the first Western artist whose biography was published while he was alive.Two biographies were published of him during his lifetime; One of them, by Giorgio Vasari, proposed that he was the pinnacle of all artistic achievement since the beginning of the Renaissance, a viewpoint that continued to have currency in art history for centuries. In his lifetime he was also often called Il Divino ("the divine one").One of the qualities most admired by his contemporaries was his terribilità, a sense of awe-inspiring grandeur, and it was the attempts of subsequent artists to imitate Michelangelo's impassioned and highly personal style that resulted in the next major movement in Western art after the High Renaissance, Mannerism.
Micheangelo was a profound perfectionist. If he found the tiniest flaw in one of his works, he considered it ruined.
