Letter of self recommendation
Thanks for giving me your time to read my self recommendation.my name is Tan Facheng.I am 23,and now majoring in Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree after my graduation in june 2009.
As a student,I have a strong appetite for knowledge.In the past three years,i have aquired basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.when I was a sophomore,I passed the CET6 with a ease.I also have a good comand of computer skill such as CAD、CAXA and office.In addition to study,I paticipated many activities on campus and off campus.In 2007,I was awarded as excellent league member for my positive performance in school activities.I used to work in XXX as a probationer,through hard work,not only did i learn more knowledge about the air-conditioner,but also I learned the way how to install and maintain it,which laid s solid foundation for my following study of specialized course.what is more important,it trained my spirit of suffering hardship.
In my spare time ,I like play basketball、guitar,which made me a great progress in all-round way.I am just this sort of man:diligent with nice personality,energentic with strong specialized skill while possessing s great team spirit.I sure that my self-confidence,and enthusiasm will enable me to conquer the difficulties in future work.
I really hope that i could be engage in refrigeration work,i have apllied for the position of refrigeration in your company.I think i quite fit for the job. would welcome the opportunity to meet you and discuss ways in which my capabilities could be directed to suit your needs. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
PS:总感觉后面两段写得有点差，高手分析下，最好专业点。
一楼几乎没找出什么错误
二楼我当你没说
三楼不错，很仔细
四楼看不懂
下面只是指出了自荐信的差错，没有改动你原来的框架和表达，因为这是你自己的思想。你能自己起草自荐信很值得称道。希望对你有所提高。
Letter of self recommendation
Thanks for giving me your time to read my self recommendation.my(这里换句，M应大写） name is Tan Facheng.I am 23,and now majoring in Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree after my graduation in june 2009.
As a student,I have a （appetite不可数，所以不应该加a）strong appetite for knowledge.In the past three years,i （I在句中总是要大写）have aquired basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.when （这里换句，W应大写）I was a sophomore I passed the CET6 with a ease(此短语的用法，a是不要的，应该是with ease）.I also have a good comand of computer skill（这里skill加s比较好）such as CAD、CAXA and office（这里office的o应该大写，表明是Office软件而不是办公室）.In addition to study,I paticipated many activities on （这里用in比较好）campus and off（这里用out of较好）campus.In 2007,I was awarded （这里最好改为an honor of，如采用你原来的表达，要加上an）as excellent league member for(这里用due to更好）my positive performance in school activities.I used to work in XXX as a probationer,through hard work,not only did i （改为I）learn more knowledge about the air-conditioner,but also I learned the way how to install and maintain it,which laid s （应该是a吧？）solid foundation for my following（这里应该用subsequent）study of specialized course（应该加s）.what（W应大写）is more important,it trained my spirit of suffering hardship.
In my spare time ,I like play basketball、(英语里不用顿号，要用逗号，）guitar（三楼在guita前加the是不对的）,which made（前面用一般现在时，make没必要用过去式，这是反映事实，所以用一般现在时为宜） me a great progress in（这里漏了an）all-round way.I am just this sort of man（这里建议改成such kind of man）:diligent with nice personality,energentic（gentic多了一个n） with strong specialized skill（应加s）while possessing s （是否是冠词a，如是，那没必要，因为spirit是不可数的）great team spirit.I sure（sure是形容词或副词，所以应改成I am sure） that my self-confidence,and enthusiasm will enable me to conquer the difficulties in future work.
I really hope that i （I）could be engage （这里应该是engaged）in refrigeration work（这里用profession更好，表示专业和职业）,i （I）have apllied for the position of refrigeration in your company.I think i（I） quite fit for the（这里的for可以不要，the最好改成this) job.(这里漏了主语，可加I） would welcome the opportunity to meet you and discuss （这里宜加the）ways in which my capabilities could be directed to suit your needs. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Letter of self recommendation
Thanks for giving me your time to read my self recommendation.my(这里换句，M应大写） name is Tan Facheng.I am 23,and now majoring in Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree after my graduation in june 2009.
As a student,I have a （appetite不可数，所以不应该加a）strong appetite for knowledge.In the past three years,i （I在句中总是要大写）have aquired basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.when （这里换句，W应大写）I was a sophomore I passed the CET6 with a ease(此短语的用法，a是不要的，应该是with ease）.I also have a good comand of computer skill（这里skill加s比较好）such as CAD、CAXA and office（这里office的o应该大写，表明是Office软件而不是办公室）.In addition to study,I paticipated many activities on （这里用in比较好）campus and off（这里用out of较好）campus.In 2007,I was awarded （这里最好改为an honor of，如采用你原来的表达，要加上an）as excellent league member for(这里用due to更好）my positive performance in school activities.I used to work in XXX as a probationer,through hard work,not only did i （改为I）learn more knowledge about the air-conditioner,but also I learned the way how to install and maintain it,which laid s （应该是a吧？）solid foundation for my following（这里应该用subsequent）study of specialized course（应该加s）.what（W应大写）is more important,it trained my spirit of suffering hardship.
In my spare time ,I like play basketball、(英语里不用顿号，要用逗号，）guitar（三楼在guita前加the是不对的）,which made（前面用一般现在时，make没必要用过去式，这是反映事实，所以用一般现在时为宜） me a great progress in（这里漏了an）all-round way.I am just this sort of man（这里建议改成such kind of man）:diligent with nice personality,energentic（gentic多了一个n） with strong specialized skill（应加s）while possessing s （是否是冠词a，如是，那没必要，因为spirit是不可数的）great team spirit.I sure（sure是形容词或副词，所以应改成I am sure） that my self-confidence,and enthusiasm will enable me to conquer the difficulties in future work.
I really hope that i （I）could be engage （这里应该是engaged）in refrigeration work（这里用profession更好，表示专业和职业）,i （I）have apllied for the position of refrigeration in your company.I think i（I） quite fit for the（这里的for可以不要，the最好改成this) job.(这里漏了主语，可加I） would welcome the opportunity to meet you and discuss （这里宜加the）ways in which my capabilities could be directed to suit your needs. Thank you in advance for your consideration.
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第1个回答 2008-10-24
信的自我建议
感谢您给我时间阅读我自决recommendation.my的名字是谭23日上午Facheng.I ，现在主修热能与动力工程在河南科技大学Technology.I将得到我的学位毕业后，我在6月2009年。
作为一名学生，我有一个强有力的胃口knowledge.In过去三年中，我具备基本知识的refrigration技术在理论和practice.when我是一个年级，我通过了CET6与ease.I也有良好的驾驶室管理的计算机技能，如计算机辅助设计， CAXA电子图板和office.In除了学习，我paticipated许多活动在校园内外campus.In 2007年，我被评为优秀的联盟成员，我积极表现在学校activities.I用来工作在三十一个感化，通过辛勤工作，不仅是我了解更多了解冷气机，而且我学到的方式如何安装和维护，这是一种为了满足奠定坚实的基础，我下面专门研究course.what更重要的是，它训练我的精神痛苦的困难。
在我的业余时间，我喜欢打篮球，吉他，这使我一个很大的进展全面way.I我只是这样的人：勤奋的好个性， energentic强烈专门技能，同时拥有大团队spirit.I相信我的自信，和热情将会使我能够征服困难，今后的工作。
我真的很希望我能从事制冷设备的工作，我有apllied的立场，在您的制冷company.I想我很适合这项工作。欢迎有机会和大家见面，讨论如何在我的能力，可以针对以满足您的需要。谢谢你提前为您考虑。
感谢您给我时间阅读我自决recommendation.my的名字是谭23日上午Facheng.I ，现在主修热能与动力工程在河南科技大学Technology.I将得到我的学位毕业后，我在6月2009年。
作为一名学生，我有一个强有力的胃口knowledge.In过去三年中，我具备基本知识的refrigration技术在理论和practice.when我是一个年级，我通过了CET6与ease.I也有良好的驾驶室管理的计算机技能，如计算机辅助设计， CAXA电子图板和office.In除了学习，我paticipated许多活动在校园内外campus.In 2007年，我被评为优秀的联盟成员，我积极表现在学校activities.I用来工作在三十一个感化，通过辛勤工作，不仅是我了解更多了解冷气机，而且我学到的方式如何安装和维护，这是一种为了满足奠定坚实的基础，我下面专门研究course.what更重要的是，它训练我的精神痛苦的困难。
在我的业余时间，我喜欢打篮球，吉他，这使我一个很大的进展全面way.I我只是这样的人：勤奋的好个性， energentic强烈专门技能，同时拥有大团队spirit.I相信我的自信，和热情将会使我能够征服困难，今后的工作。
我真的很希望我能从事制冷设备的工作，我有apllied的立场，在您的制冷company.I想我很适合这项工作。欢迎有机会和大家见面，讨论如何在我的能力，可以针对以满足您的需要。谢谢你提前为您考虑。
第2个回答 2008-10-24
Recommendation
Thanks for your time for reading my recommendation. My name is Tan Facheng.I am 23,my major is Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree after my graduation in june 2009.
As a student,I have a strong appetite for knowledge.In the past three years,i have acquired basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.When I was a sophomore,I passed the CET-6.I also have a good command on computer skills such as CAD、CAXA and office.In addition,I participated many activities in campus and out of campus.In 2007,I was awarded as an excellent league member for my positive performance in school activities.I used to work in XXX as probation,through hard working,not only did i learn more knowledge about the air-conditioner,but also learned the way how to install and maintain it,which became the solid foundation for my following study in specialized course.What is more important,it trained my spirit of suffering hardship.
In my spare time ,I like play basketball、guitar,which made me a great progress in all-round.I am a man that diligent with nice personality,energetic with strong specialized skill and possessing great teamwork spirit.I am quite sure that my self-confidence,and enthusiasm will enable me to conquer all the difficulties in future works.
I really wish to engage in refrigeration work,and I believe that I am just the qulified person you are looking for, for the position of refrigeration in your company, and really hope you can give me a chance to work together with you, for a better future.
Thank you in advance for your consideration.
Thanks for your time for reading my recommendation. My name is Tan Facheng.I am 23,my major is Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree after my graduation in june 2009.
As a student,I have a strong appetite for knowledge.In the past three years,i have acquired basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.When I was a sophomore,I passed the CET-6.I also have a good command on computer skills such as CAD、CAXA and office.In addition,I participated many activities in campus and out of campus.In 2007,I was awarded as an excellent league member for my positive performance in school activities.I used to work in XXX as probation,through hard working,not only did i learn more knowledge about the air-conditioner,but also learned the way how to install and maintain it,which became the solid foundation for my following study in specialized course.What is more important,it trained my spirit of suffering hardship.
In my spare time ,I like play basketball、guitar,which made me a great progress in all-round.I am a man that diligent with nice personality,energetic with strong specialized skill and possessing great teamwork spirit.I am quite sure that my self-confidence,and enthusiasm will enable me to conquer all the difficulties in future works.
I really wish to engage in refrigeration work,and I believe that I am just the qulified person you are looking for, for the position of refrigeration in your company, and really hope you can give me a chance to work together with you, for a better future.
Thank you in advance for your consideration.
第3个回答 2008-10-24
Self Recommendation
Thank you for your time to read my self recommendation letter.my name is Tan Facheng,23-year-old,major in Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree in june 2009.
As a student,I am eager for knowledge.In the past three years,i have learnt basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.when I was a sophomore,I passed CET6 successfully.I also have a good command of computer skills such as CAD、CAXA and MS office.what's more,I joined many activities on campus and off campus.In 2007,I was awarded excellent league member for my performance in school activities.I worked in XXX as a probationer.i learn knowledge about the air-conditioner,and how to install and maintain as well,which helped me build solid foundation for my following study of related college courses.
By the way I like to play basketball which requires strong sense of team work.
After all,i am qualified to the position you offer, it's my honor to be one of suitable candidates.I am confident to get the job.
At last, i want to thank you in advance for your consideration.
Thank you for your time to read my self recommendation letter.my name is Tan Facheng,23-year-old,major in Thermal Energy and Power Engneering in Henan University of Science and Technology.I will receive my BE degree in june 2009.
As a student,I am eager for knowledge.In the past three years,i have learnt basic knowledge of refrigration technology both in theory and practice.when I was a sophomore,I passed CET6 successfully.I also have a good command of computer skills such as CAD、CAXA and MS office.what's more,I joined many activities on campus and off campus.In 2007,I was awarded excellent league member for my performance in school activities.I worked in XXX as a probationer.i learn knowledge about the air-conditioner,and how to install and maintain as well,which helped me build solid foundation for my following study of related college courses.
By the way I like to play basketball which requires strong sense of team work.
After all,i am qualified to the position you offer, it's my honor to be one of suitable candidates.I am confident to get the job.
At last, i want to thank you in advance for your consideration.
第4个回答 2008-10-24
cover letter
First, thanks so much for the attention of this cover letter.
My name is Facheng Tan of 23 years old, major in Thermal Energy and Power Engineering in HeNan University of Science and Technology, and I will graduate in the coming June, 2009 with BE. As a college student, I do study hard during the past three years, which made me acquired the basic knowledge of refrigeration technology both in theory and practice. When I was a sophomore, I passed CET-6 and I also have a good command of computer skills such as CAD, CAXA and Office. Besides studying, I also participate a lot of activities in the campus or even society, and in 2007, I was awarded as the excellent league member for my active performance. Once I used to work in as a probationer, which made me learn more knowledge of air-conditioners with my hard work, and also I’ve learned how to install and maintain the air-conditioner practically. I think this experience did do a lot favor for my specialty learning, and what is more important is, it steeled myself a kind of inspiration and capability of conquering difficulties.
I like playing basketball and the guitars for spare entertainment, and it makes me develop myself in other aspects. I am a kind of person of diligence and kindness, I think, energetic while team work and spirit. I’m convinced that I’m able to conquer difficulties in my future work with the self-confidence, youth and enthusiasm.
I do hope that I could be engaged in the position of refrigeration in your company which I think I am fully suitable for., and I would appreciate it very much if your offer me an opportunity for a face-to-face interview so that I can make a detailed introduction of myself.
Thanks again for your attention and I’m looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Facheng Tan
First, thanks so much for the attention of this cover letter.
My name is Facheng Tan of 23 years old, major in Thermal Energy and Power Engineering in HeNan University of Science and Technology, and I will graduate in the coming June, 2009 with BE. As a college student, I do study hard during the past three years, which made me acquired the basic knowledge of refrigeration technology both in theory and practice. When I was a sophomore, I passed CET-6 and I also have a good command of computer skills such as CAD, CAXA and Office. Besides studying, I also participate a lot of activities in the campus or even society, and in 2007, I was awarded as the excellent league member for my active performance. Once I used to work in as a probationer, which made me learn more knowledge of air-conditioners with my hard work, and also I’ve learned how to install and maintain the air-conditioner practically. I think this experience did do a lot favor for my specialty learning, and what is more important is, it steeled myself a kind of inspiration and capability of conquering difficulties.
I like playing basketball and the guitars for spare entertainment, and it makes me develop myself in other aspects. I am a kind of person of diligence and kindness, I think, energetic while team work and spirit. I’m convinced that I’m able to conquer difficulties in my future work with the self-confidence, youth and enthusiasm.
I do hope that I could be engaged in the position of refrigeration in your company which I think I am fully suitable for., and I would appreciate it very much if your offer me an opportunity for a face-to-face interview so that I can make a detailed introduction of myself.
Thanks again for your attention and I’m looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Facheng Tan
第5个回答 2008-10-28
用了一上午的时间做了如下修改，不仅从语法角度，同时从英文自荐信的惯例表达等方面进行了改正、润饰。由于时间关系，原文中的一些错误和不合惯例之处没有再用汉语把原因列出一一解说，当然，下文也有不妥疏漏之处，还请各位同僚专家批评指正
Letter of self recommendation
Thank you for giving me your time to read this and, my name is Tan Facheng, aged 23, from Henan University of Science and Technology, majoring in Thermal Energy and Power Engineering.I will graduate in the June of 2009 and a Bachelor degree wished.
With a strong appetite for knowledge, I have mastered the basics on refrigeration technology, theoretically and practically, having passed CET6. Also with good command of computer application, the operation of the following softwares was included--CAD, CAXA and MS Office. Besides, many activities were participated both inside and out the campus, with a fruit of award for excellent league member in 2007.As an intern in XXX in 2007, both the knowledge of air-conditioners and the operation of installment and maintainence of them were mastered and, the ability and spirit of suffering hardship was accquired and inspired during it.
Regarding the personal spare interests ,playing basketball and guitar was preferred.And such words could be found in other's description of my characters, as diligence, probity, confidence, enthusiasm, energentic and team spirit. With them, I am full of hope of success in spite of difficulties in the future.
Having apllied for the position of refrigeration in your company. Please feel free to contact me if you wish more information. Thank you very much for your consideration and I look forward to your contact with me .
Letter of self recommendation
Thank you for giving me your time to read this and, my name is Tan Facheng, aged 23, from Henan University of Science and Technology, majoring in Thermal Energy and Power Engineering.I will graduate in the June of 2009 and a Bachelor degree wished.
With a strong appetite for knowledge, I have mastered the basics on refrigeration technology, theoretically and practically, having passed CET6. Also with good command of computer application, the operation of the following softwares was included--CAD, CAXA and MS Office. Besides, many activities were participated both inside and out the campus, with a fruit of award for excellent league member in 2007.As an intern in XXX in 2007, both the knowledge of air-conditioners and the operation of installment and maintainence of them were mastered and, the ability and spirit of suffering hardship was accquired and inspired during it.
Regarding the personal spare interests ,playing basketball and guitar was preferred.And such words could be found in other's description of my characters, as diligence, probity, confidence, enthusiasm, energentic and team spirit. With them, I am full of hope of success in spite of difficulties in the future.
Having apllied for the position of refrigeration in your company. Please feel free to contact me if you wish more information. Thank you very much for your consideration and I look forward to your contact with me .
