Wendsor Castle lies thirty-two kilometers west from London,close to the southern bank of the River Thames,which is the oldest,greatest occupied existing castle in the world.这句话里有什么语法错误吗？
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Wendsor Castle lies thirty-two kilometers west from London, and close to the southern bank of the River Thames. It is the oldest,greatest occupied existing castle in the world.
Wendsor Castle lies thirty-two kilometers west from London, and close to the southern bank of the River Thames. It is the oldest,greatest occupied existing castle in the world.
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