How terrible the weather was! It is drizzling the whole day ,undoubtedly making me feel so annoyed . The sudden change of weather leads to countless students with a bad cold , for they wear not enough clothes . Moreover , the bad weather completely ruined our exercise after class. For me ,it's lucky enough to cancel this activity owning to my laziness.
I don't know why so many poets , writers and artists are fond of glorifying the spring . Based on my pupils' ideas , we draw the conclusion consistently that spring , a bothersome season , which unquestionably destroy people's good mood and brings us accountable ill effects.
麻烦看看有没有语法错误啊。或者这句话怎么用会逻辑更好一点。润色一点。
How terrible the weather was! It was drizzling the whole day,which undoubtedly made me feel so annoyed. The sudden change of weather led countless students to come down with a bad cold, for they didn't wear enough clothes . Moreover, the bad weather completely ruined our exercise after class. For me ,it's lucky enough to cancel that activity owning to my laziness.
I don't know why so many poets , writers and artists are fond of glorious spring . Based on us pupils' ideas, we consistently drew a conclusion that spring, a bothersome season unquestionably destroys people's good mood and brings us accountable bad effects.
I don't know why so many poets , writers and artists are fond of glorious spring . Based on us pupils' ideas, we consistently drew a conclusion that spring, a bothersome season unquestionably destroys people's good mood and brings us accountable bad effects.
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第1个回答 2012-02-27
How terrible the weather IS ! It is drizzling the whole day ,undoubtedly making me feel so annoyed . The sudden change of weather leads to LOTS OF students' bad cold , for they DON'T HAVE enough clothes ON. Moreover , the bad weather completely ruined our AFTER-CLASS exercise . For me ,it's lucky enough to cancel this activity BECAUSE I AM REALLY LAZY.
I don't know why ARE so many poets , writers and artists fond of glorifying the spring . IN MY EYES , I draw the conclusion consistently that spring , a bothersome season , which unquestionably destroy people's good mood and brings us accountable ill effects
修改的部分我用了大写字母。请参考。
I don't know why ARE so many poets , writers and artists fond of glorifying the spring . IN MY EYES , I draw the conclusion consistently that spring , a bothersome season , which unquestionably destroy people's good mood and brings us accountable ill effects
修改的部分我用了大写字母。请参考。
