下面几个句子是否正确，错误的地方请指出，谢谢！
1.昨晚上看<尼基塔>看到将近12点了，要不是最后不小心把笔记本踢翻了估计还要继续看下去。
I watched Nikita nearly 12 point in the evening if my computer is not kick over perhapers watching still .
2.这周好长啊，整整要上七天的班，真好累啊，全身都是酸疼。
so long this week has seven working days I very tired and body aches whole.
3.每天坚持造五个句子，英语能不能进步呢？
I Insist on make sentences everyday could raise the english level.
4.这周六外婆生日，可是周未又答应朋友替他办事，真烦！
Bother it that my grandmathor is birthday on this saturday but I promise my frend do something .
5.今天周四，老妈提前回老家了，晚上没有做饭，回家自己吃泡面真好啊！
it's Thursday today my mother come back home old the dinner not make I can boiled noodles .
大家帮我看看这几个句子毛病在哪里，要怎么改好，请大家不吝赐教!
1.昨晚上看<尼基塔>看到将近12点了，要不是最后不小心把笔记本踢翻了估计还要继续看下去。
I watched Nikita nearly 12 point in the evening if my computer is not kick over perhapers watching still
I had watched Nikita till nearly 12 o'clock at midnight, if my computer was not kicked over, perhaps I would have keeped on watching it.
2.这周好长啊，整整要上七天的班，真好累啊，全身都是酸疼。
so long this week has seven working days I very tired and body aches whole.
It seems that this week is so long to me!（感觉长，并不是真的长） I have to go to work everyday in this week. I feel so tired and ache all over.
3.每天坚持造五个句子，英语能不能进步呢？
I Insist on make sentences everyday could raise the english level. Insist on doing
If I insist on making five sentences everyday, could my English be improved?
4.这周六外婆生日，可是周未又答应朋友替他办事，真烦！
Bother it that my grandmathor is birthday on this saturday but I promise my frend do something . do sb a favor 帮某人办事
I was bothered by the mather that my grandmathor's birthday is this Saturday, but I had promised to do my friend a favor on the same day.
5.今天周四，老妈提前回老家了，晚上没有做饭，回家自己吃泡面真好啊！
it's Thursday today my mother come back home old the dinner not make I can boiled noodles .
泡面instant noodles
It's Thursday today. my mother had gone to her hometown. There is no one cooked the dinner, so I can boil instant noodles. It's great!
I watched Nikita nearly 12 point in the evening if my computer is not kick over perhapers watching still
I had watched Nikita till nearly 12 o'clock at midnight, if my computer was not kicked over, perhaps I would have keeped on watching it.
2.这周好长啊，整整要上七天的班，真好累啊，全身都是酸疼。
so long this week has seven working days I very tired and body aches whole.
It seems that this week is so long to me!（感觉长，并不是真的长） I have to go to work everyday in this week. I feel so tired and ache all over.
3.每天坚持造五个句子，英语能不能进步呢？
I Insist on make sentences everyday could raise the english level. Insist on doing
If I insist on making five sentences everyday, could my English be improved?
4.这周六外婆生日，可是周未又答应朋友替他办事，真烦！
Bother it that my grandmathor is birthday on this saturday but I promise my frend do something . do sb a favor 帮某人办事
I was bothered by the mather that my grandmathor's birthday is this Saturday, but I had promised to do my friend a favor on the same day.
5.今天周四，老妈提前回老家了，晚上没有做饭，回家自己吃泡面真好啊！
it's Thursday today my mother come back home old the dinner not make I can boiled noodles .
泡面instant noodles
It's Thursday today. my mother had gone to her hometown. There is no one cooked the dinner, so I can boil instant noodles. It's great!
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第1个回答 2011-10-13
I watched Nikita nearly till 12 last nignt.if my computer hadnot been kicked over perhapers I would have continued to watch it.
this week is .so long that we have worked for seven days. I am very tired and aches all over the body.
If I Insist on make five sentences every day ,could I raise my English level?
this saturday is my grandmathor's birthday ,but what bothers me is that I have promised my frend to do something
today is Thursday, my mother has gone back to my hometown, and didn't prepared supper, but I am happy that I can boil noodles myself.
this week is .so long that we have worked for seven days. I am very tired and aches all over the body.
If I Insist on make five sentences every day ,could I raise my English level?
this saturday is my grandmathor's birthday ,but what bothers me is that I have promised my frend to do something
today is Thursday, my mother has gone back to my hometown, and didn't prepared supper, but I am happy that I can boil noodles myself.
第2个回答 2011-10-13
1.last night I saw nikita almost 12 o 'clock, if it weren't for finally spilled notebook knocked over the are expected to continue to see more.
2.This week so long, seven days for the class, really tired, the whole body is to ache.
3.Every day. Five sentences made, English can progress?
4.This Saturday is my grandma's birthday , but I promised to work for my friend, a bother!
5.Today, mama on Thursday in advance, not to cook and gone home at night, home to eat their instant noodles in a good!!!!!
2.This week so long, seven days for the class, really tired, the whole body is to ache.
3.Every day. Five sentences made, English can progress?
4.This Saturday is my grandma's birthday , but I promised to work for my friend, a bother!
5.Today, mama on Thursday in advance, not to cook and gone home at night, home to eat their instant noodles in a good!!!!!
第3个回答 2011-10-13
对，不过使句子连贯一些会更好
