题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
我的作文：
I do not think to work quickly and risk making mistakes is more important than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct for the following reasons.
First of all, to make sure everything is correct is an attitude of one's when he working. A responsible person must have a serious attitude. When we do something, it is not only relative with ourselves. It may affect our collogue, our company or our customers. Once we were wrong, they may have a big lost. What's more, even one thing is only our own business, it also may affect our future. So many people are watching what am I doing, they will have a impression on us from the effort and progress. So make sure that everything is correct even spend more time is also important than work quickly and risk making mistakes .
Second, work slowly do not means waste time. As in today's world, too many people are too careless to do work. They always think they should quickly and save time to do other things. But as a result, they may do nothing right completely. But people who work slowly will have enough time to think carefully and make their heart quiet. Then the good consequence will come out.
Third, I agree that as a young person, we should not fair about making mistakes. But it does not mean we should risk making mistakes. When we have made mistakes, we should do our best to salve the problem. But when we have not made mistakes, to avoid of making mistakes is more important. And as what I have said above, work slowly can decrease the possibility of making mistakes. So work slowly and make sure that everything is correct of course is important than work quickly and risk making mistakes.
Above all, I have described my points in details. And I hold on it strictly. I hope everyone especially the young people can think twice when they do something and Have a right attitude on life and working.
First of all, people go（不要用want，题目问的就是go） to get prepared for their careers. In a college or a university, people have more access to professional knowledge of (尽量不要用of这种定语形式，感觉在美国人眼里这样子会犯错。)their career.There（注意代词的指代是否明确） are different kinds of major and each major has their own courses.these courses make more pointed reference,unlike in high school we just learn some basic subjects.
总的来说，语法错误有，语言表达不是很连贯，感觉是高中生写的文章，因为英式英语的用法在里面感觉有点多，呵呵，不知道猜测的对不对。oppotunities of internship可以直接说成 internship oppotunities或者是oppotunities for internship之类的我就不提出来了。表达能力有些欠缺。平时可以多看些英语文章。思路已经有了，看的出来是准备过的，上过辅导班或者研究过范文的～～在基础上要下些功夫，像单复数之类的语法错误在托福作文里就有点说不过去了～～
i disagree with this point to some extent.We all know that it's stupid to do any work in a some way and the way we used should be depended on different situations.
In most occasions,we need to be careful with those work which we're facing,and it's highly possible for us to make a mistake while we're working quickly,and the fact that we cannot pay enough attention to every aspects will often lead to some mistakes,which may result into a bad influence.
But in some specific occasions,we need the work to be finished at a short limited time,so we have to work quickly ,risking some mistakes,and mistakes in such conditions just are hard to be avoided.But we should try to reduce mistakes, meaning that we should spend more extra energy.
Above all,i think it's important for us to be careful while working,trying to finish work quick without mistakes.
