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An Idol in My Heart
A very good morning/afternoon to you all,everybody! My name is ***,I'm glad and it's also my honor to have the chance to share my ideas about idols here.
Well,talking about idols,you may say,"My idol is Li Ming.""Mine is Liu Dehua."and "Yang Liwei is mine."and so on.Yes,your idols may be the stars.But,I would like to tell you all,mine is quite different from yours,for it's Zhou Enlai,the former premier of new China.
As Chinese,we're familar with Zhou Enlai.He was a great man and one of the founders of new China.He devoted his whole life to the liberation cause of Chinese people.He cared much more about others than himself.He had no child.But he said proudly to the world,"Every child in China is my child."He died on August 1st,1976,leaving no money of his own in the bank.
What a great man!Though he has been away from us for many years,he were still alive in my mind,for he is my idol.
That's all,thank you!
A very good morning/afternoon to you all,everybody! My name is ***,I'm glad and it's also my honor to have the chance to share my ideas about idols here.
Well,talking about idols,you may say,"My idol is Li Ming.""Mine is Liu Dehua."and "Yang Liwei is mine."and so on.Yes,your idols may be the stars.But,I would like to tell you all,mine is quite different from yours,for it's Zhou Enlai,the former premier of new China.
As Chinese,we're familar with Zhou Enlai.He was a great man and one of the founders of new China.He devoted his whole life to the liberation cause of Chinese people.He cared much more about others than himself.He had no child.But he said proudly to the world,"Every child in China is my child."He died on August 1st,1976,leaving no money of his own in the bank.
What a great man!Though he has been away from us for many years,he were still alive in my mind,for he is my idol.
That's all,thank you!
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第1个回答 2011-11-03
嗯，应该自己写，才有感觉和内涵！写好帮你修改
给你列个提纲：（1）点明主旨（偶像是谁）
（2）分几个小点论述一下（他有什么吸引你的地方）
（3）你从他身上学到了什么，以后你会怎么做
给你列个提纲：（1）点明主旨（偶像是谁）
（2）分几个小点论述一下（他有什么吸引你的地方）
（3）你从他身上学到了什么，以后你会怎么做
第2个回答 2012-11-22
I have a lot of idols in my heart in different fields. Today I want to talk about the great soccer player -- Messi. Today in the soccer field, I do not think any one can match him, his great ball controlling skills brought a world of fans fantastic exclamation. He is fast, and he can easily cross the defenders who intend to stop him. His talent can even match the god of soccer -- Marodona. I like him because I like soccer, the real artistic soccer. And he will be my idol forever.
第3个回答 2011-11-03
自己写！我们帮你修改。
1你的偶像是谁？明星还是身边的人？
2他怎样成为你的偶像的？你欣赏他哪一点？
3你对他的爱是怎样的？
4他对你的成长有没有影响？你想成为他那样的人吗？本回答被提问者采纳
1你的偶像是谁？明星还是身边的人？
2他怎样成为你的偶像的？你欣赏他哪一点？
3你对他的爱是怎样的？
4他对你的成长有没有影响？你想成为他那样的人吗？本回答被提问者采纳
