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My Idol Cai xukun.
As you know , there's some famous words " Singing ,dancing ,rapping and basketball." My favorite idol is Cai xukun.
He is a good singer .He sings very well.He told us "The more effort,the more lucky" I agree with him .He is not only a singer but also a postive person.He likes music very much.
Although some people donot like him,he is still himself and believes he is the king of the music world and never gives up . When I listen to his songs ,I feel happy and relaxing.
So I hope that all his efforts can be seen by everyone and that more people like him as much as l do.
译文:我的偶像蔡徐坤。
如你所知,有一些著名的词“唱歌,跳舞,说唱和篮球。”我最喜欢的偶像是蔡旭坤。
他是个好歌手。他唱得非常好。他告诉我们“越努力,越幸运”我同意他的观点。他不仅是一个歌手,也是一个积极的人。他非常喜欢音乐。虽然有些人不喜欢他,但他仍然是他自己,相信他是音乐世界的国王,从不放弃。当我听他的歌时,我感到快乐和放松。
所以我希望他所有的努力可以被每个人看到,并有更多的人像我一样喜欢他。
写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
My Idol Cai xukun
As you know , there's some famous words " Singing ,dancing ,rapping and basketball." My favorite idol is Cai xukun.
He is a good singer .He sings very well.He told us "The more effort,the more lucky" I agree with him .He is not only a singer but also a postive person.He likes music very much.
Although some people donot like him,he is still himself and believes he is the king of the music world and never gives up . When I listen to his songs ,I feel happy and relaxing.
So I hope that all his efforts can be seen by everyone and that more people like him as much as l do.
我的偶像蔡旭坤
正如你所知,有一些著名的词“唱歌、跳舞、说唱和篮球”。我最喜欢的偶像是蔡旭坤。
他是一个好歌手。他唱得很好。他告诉我们“越努力,越幸运”我同意他的说法。他不仅是一个歌手,而且是一个积极的人。他非常喜欢音乐。
虽然有些人不喜欢他,但他仍然是自己,相信自己是音乐界的王者,永不放弃。当我听他的歌时,我感到快乐和放松。
所以我希望他所有的努力都能被每个人看到,也希望更多的人像我一样喜欢他。
本回答被网友采纳He was born on August 2,1998,so he previous English name is August.I know him from an entertainment program called idol trainee.I was fascinated by his confidence.I've never had an idol before him.
Do you know what attracted me to him?Because of his brilliance on the stage and his dedication to music.He is an original musician,and he always treats the stage with his heart.Everything needs to be perfect.He can practice a dance move until he is satisfied.His efforts also inspired me to keep moving forward to become a better me.
That's why I like him.Perhaps many people who don't know him well still have prejudice against him.But I'm sure one day he'll shine.Finally,I will shout out name.His name is CAI Xukun.