求一篇英语作文，有关过度包装现象的，提纲是1. 目前很多商品存在过度包装现象 2. 出现这一现象的原因 3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议，最好是原创没有语法错误的
Excessive packaging
In recent years,we have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon that more and more goods were packaged so extravagant.Excessive packaging has been brought into public attention.There are three possible reasons to account for this phenomenon.
To begin with,more and more people choose the goods just want to be a present which must be good-looking and luxurious,as a result that they ignore the true value of the goods.Sometimes the cost of the package are more expensive than the goods itself which let us feel ridiculous.What's more ,the manufacturers have a wrong concept that they want to complete with others by goods' beautiful package but not quality,which should be corrected.In the third place,the government's commercial apartment is short of measures to control this phenomenon.
In my opinion,it is important to take measure to avoid such occurrences.Among those solutions,changing the consumers' value concept is one.Government also should help to do something.As long as the consumer,manufacturers,government make joint efforts,a sound solution is not far away.
In recent years,we have witnessed an unfavorable social phenomenon that more and more goods were packaged so extravagant.Excessive packaging has been brought into public attention.There are three possible reasons to account for this phenomenon.
To begin with,more and more people choose the goods just want to be a present which must be good-looking and luxurious,as a result that they ignore the true value of the goods.Sometimes the cost of the package are more expensive than the goods itself which let us feel ridiculous.What's more ,the manufacturers have a wrong concept that they want to complete with others by goods' beautiful package but not quality,which should be corrected.In the third place,the government's commercial apartment is short of measures to control this phenomenon.
In my opinion,it is important to take measure to avoid such occurrences.Among those solutions,changing the consumers' value concept is one.Government also should help to do something.As long as the consumer,manufacturers,government make joint efforts,a sound solution is not far away.
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