During the summer holiday in 2013，I think i should do something meaningful instead of touring，but i got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked like a cleaner there。i worked for over more than 9 hours a day。the job was hard，bored and seemed endless。and it was too tiring a job that i nearly gave it up half way。after all，i stuck it with effort。every day i set out for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening。finally，i finished a job before the new school term。what an unforgettable experence i was！
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改错如下：touring后加around；but改成so；like 改成as；over去掉；too 改成such；every day改成everyday；a 改成the；i改成it。(experence 改experience)
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改错如下：touring后加around；but改成so；like 改成as；over去掉；too 改成such；every day改成everyday；a 改成the；i改成it。(experence 改experience)
如果你哪句不懂请继续追问，我会为你详细解答。
采纳我哦！
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第1个回答 2014-05-08
think改 thought but改so like 改as over 去掉 bored改boring stuck后加to a 改the
第2个回答 2014-05-08
think-thought but-so like-as over去掉 too-so after all--However I finished a job中a改为the I-it
