如题所述
雅思大作文开头要素一： Restatement of the Topic
大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题，在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。
方法一 : 改写。即按照题目所给的内容，用不同的表达方法重新写一遍，千万不能抄袭。
注意 ：改一两个词不算改写，一定要将整个表达方式改掉。
方法二：自己展开。即根据题目所谈到的话题内容适当展开，简单谈谈目前社会中的情况怎样。
注意： 不要谈的太多，更加不能偏题，与题目话题毫不相干。
雅思大作文开头要素二： Express Your Opinion
大作文的题目中一般会问你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等，因此必须与之相对应的在首段中表明你的观点。
方法一：中立观点(即辩证表达)。即可以说某种做法既有好又有坏;对某种观点又有人同意又有人不同意等等。
说明： 比较好的表达如：I partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
不要说：some people agree while others don'nt agree.这可不是中立地表达自己的观点。
所谓中立，其实是辩证的关系!老外看问题比较辩证，一般不会一棍子打死。
方法二：一边倒观点。即直截了当的说赞成某个观点或不赞成某个观点等等。
方法三：不表观点。即不在首段明确的表达自己的观点，但必须有引出下文之类话来作衔接。
说明： 方法一在考试中用的最多;方法二适中;方法三用的比较少(不表观点，但必须表明要先分析一下，在最后一段表明观点)。
雅思大作文开头要素三： No Excessive Background
大作文首段中只要涵盖以上两要素即可，不要写过多不相干的展开内容，更不要将理由(即主体段的分论点)写进去，否则主体段就没内容写了。
大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题，在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。
方法一 : 改写。即按照题目所给的内容，用不同的表达方法重新写一遍，千万不能抄袭。
注意 ：改一两个词不算改写，一定要将整个表达方式改掉。
方法二：自己展开。即根据题目所谈到的话题内容适当展开，简单谈谈目前社会中的情况怎样。
注意： 不要谈的太多，更加不能偏题，与题目话题毫不相干。
雅思大作文开头要素二： Express Your Opinion
大作文的题目中一般会问你 do you agree or disagree 或 what do you think 等，因此必须与之相对应的在首段中表明你的观点。
方法一：中立观点(即辩证表达)。即可以说某种做法既有好又有坏;对某种观点又有人同意又有人不同意等等。
说明： 比较好的表达如：I partly agree with the opinion expressed above.
不要说：some people agree while others don'nt agree.这可不是中立地表达自己的观点。
所谓中立，其实是辩证的关系!老外看问题比较辩证，一般不会一棍子打死。
方法二：一边倒观点。即直截了当的说赞成某个观点或不赞成某个观点等等。
方法三：不表观点。即不在首段明确的表达自己的观点，但必须有引出下文之类话来作衔接。
说明： 方法一在考试中用的最多;方法二适中;方法三用的比较少(不表观点，但必须表明要先分析一下，在最后一段表明观点)。
雅思大作文开头要素三： No Excessive Background
大作文首段中只要涵盖以上两要素即可，不要写过多不相干的展开内容，更不要将理由(即主体段的分论点)写进去，否则主体段就没内容写了。
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第1个回答 推荐于2018-08-13
怎么写好雅思大作文开头段
万事开头难，很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态，大多情况下可能会胡乱写作，甚至抄题，这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳，导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此，快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下环球雅思将为考生们总结一下怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的两大要素，供考生们参考。
写好雅思大作文开头段要素一：现象句
雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。
E．g．1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish．Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of
E．g．2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old．Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible．
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven
E．g．3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies．Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this．
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school
所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。
雅思大作文开头段经典套句：
1．It is true that．．．．．．是真实的
2．I tend to agree that… 我同意…
3．It is quite common… …是常见的
4．There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的
5．There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的
6．It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的
地点：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place
时间：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays
写好雅思大作文开头段要素二：点到问题
雅思大作文考题分成两种：report & argumentative。
对于report（题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem．）
E．g．4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior．
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来，全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。
E．g．5
Happiness is considered to be very important in life．
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people．While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships．Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点，把造成这个现象的原因大致导出，与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。
对于argumentative（do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion．; is it a positive or negative development?），这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点，所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。
E．g．6
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children．
Do you agree or disagree?
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
改写题目+主动变被动：have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by
直接表达自己的观点：I tend to agree that
E．g．7
Some people feel that entertainers (e．g．film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money．
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid．This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
现象+观点
E．g．8
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems．
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere．Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol．
总之，如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文，环球托福建议考生们在雅思大作文开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求，把时间控制在5分钟之内，把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。以上就是本次环球雅思为大家搜集整理的怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的方法介绍和例题分析，希望能够帮助到大家，最后，环球雅思预祝各位考试顺利！本回答被网友采纳
万事开头难，很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态，大多情况下可能会胡乱写作，甚至抄题，这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳，导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此，快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下环球雅思将为考生们总结一下怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的两大要素，供考生们参考。
写好雅思大作文开头段要素一：现象句
雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。
E．g．1
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish．Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of
E．g．2
Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old．Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible．
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven
E．g．3
In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies．Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this．
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school
所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。
雅思大作文开头段经典套句：
1．It is true that．．．．．．是真实的
2．I tend to agree that… 我同意…
3．It is quite common… …是常见的
4．There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的
5．There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的
6．It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的
地点：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place
时间：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays
写好雅思大作文开头段要素二：点到问题
雅思大作文考题分成两种：report & argumentative。
对于report（题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem．）
E．g．4
In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior．
What do you think are the cause of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来，全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。
E．g．5
Happiness is considered to be very important in life．
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people．While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships．Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点，把造成这个现象的原因大致导出，与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。
对于argumentative（do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion．; is it a positive or negative development?），这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点，所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。
E．g．6
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children．
Do you agree or disagree?
I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
改写题目+主动变被动：have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by
直接表达自己的观点：I tend to agree that
E．g．7
Some people feel that entertainers (e．g．film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money．
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid．This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do．
写好雅思大作文开头段总结——
现象+观点
E．g．8
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems．
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere．Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol．
总之，如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文，环球托福建议考生们在雅思大作文开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求，把时间控制在5分钟之内，把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。以上就是本次环球雅思为大家搜集整理的怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的方法介绍和例题分析，希望能够帮助到大家，最后，环球雅思预祝各位考试顺利！本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答 2021-05-07
通常作文的首段通常包含以下几个方面的内容：
1)场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon。
2)一些人的观点(some people’s opinion)，这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。
3)个人观点，这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。
雅思大作文的总字数有最低的要求，即250字，这250字大家一定要合理的分配布局，第一段最好是写3-5句话就ok了，而且小编在这里提醒大家，雅思写作好的开头千万不要在首段就把所有的话都说完。雅思写作好的开头方式通常有一下几种情况：
1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon)，有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase)，可以做:
主动语态<=>被动语态
主谓宾<=>主系表
某些近义词互换
Example:
At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?
→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。
2)题目中包含了背景信息，有时出现一些人的观点，但题目中字数较少，若直接重新表达，字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开首方式来保证字数，这也是比较好的雅思写作好的开头。
把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year，millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
追溯历史，过去与现在形成对比。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点，而没有背景信息。这种情况下，我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。
Example:
The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?
→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
除此之外，考生在雅思写作首段的时候千万不要范语法和拼写等低级错误，这会给阅卷老师留下很糟糕的印象，同时也会影响阅卷老师对文章内容的理解。
1)场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon。
2)一些人的观点(some people’s opinion)，这部分在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。
3)个人观点，这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。
雅思大作文的总字数有最低的要求，即250字，这250字大家一定要合理的分配布局，第一段最好是写3-5句话就ok了，而且小编在这里提醒大家，雅思写作好的开头千万不要在首段就把所有的话都说完。雅思写作好的开头方式通常有一下几种情况：
1)题目中包含了背景信息(phenomenon)，有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下最保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase)，可以做:
主动语态<=>被动语态
主谓宾<=>主系表
某些近义词互换
Example:
At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?
→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。
2)题目中包含了背景信息，有时出现一些人的观点，但题目中字数较少，若直接重新表达，字数凑不到40字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开首方式来保证字数，这也是比较好的雅思写作好的开头。
把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year，millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
追溯历史，过去与现在形成对比。
Example:
International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?
→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
3)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点，而没有背景信息。这种情况下，我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的信息在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。
Example:
The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?
→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。
除此之外，考生在雅思写作首段的时候千万不要范语法和拼写等低级错误，这会给阅卷老师留下很糟糕的印象，同时也会影响阅卷老师对文章内容的理解。
