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The Most Important Day of My Life
Everyone has his most important days.As for me,a teenager,important days don't mean Children's Day,Spring Festival and any other days,but to mean the day my father gave me strength and confidence,and even the second life.
When I was small,I suffered a strang terrible disease,which made me cough day and night.I had to stay in bed all day.My father took
me from hospital to hospial.He gave up his job,took good care of me
everyday.Soon we ran out of money.But I still Cough.I had thought I was dying.I started to lose heart and then an terrible idea occured to me.I wanted to commit suicide.Knowing about that,father got angry,"How can you do that,poor boy?We should not lose heart.We should not give up.I'll cure you at any cost."Father looked at me softly."I am sorry dad,I know you love me but...""Don't say that
again,we are father and son,and will be together forever."Hearing this,tears came to my eyes.I looked up at the calendar,it said September 23rd. From then on,father borrowed money from door to door,and took me to see the doctors again.I recovered soon.
September 23rd is the most important day to me.
Everyone has his most important days.As for me,a teenager,important days don't mean Children's Day,Spring Festival and any other days,but to mean the day my father gave me strength and confidence,and even the second life.
When I was small,I suffered a strang terrible disease,which made me cough day and night.I had to stay in bed all day.My father took
me from hospital to hospial.He gave up his job,took good care of me
everyday.Soon we ran out of money.But I still Cough.I had thought I was dying.I started to lose heart and then an terrible idea occured to me.I wanted to commit suicide.Knowing about that,father got angry,"How can you do that,poor boy?We should not lose heart.We should not give up.I'll cure you at any cost."Father looked at me softly."I am sorry dad,I know you love me but...""Don't say that
again,we are father and son,and will be together forever."Hearing this,tears came to my eyes.I looked up at the calendar,it said September 23rd. From then on,father borrowed money from door to door,and took me to see the doctors again.I recovered soon.
September 23rd is the most important day to me.
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第1个回答 2009-07-17
the important day of my life As for me now ,something always happen in my life .The big one ,the little one .something is very important for me .The most important day in my life is the day i receive the notebook for a permit into the college . I remembered that's a fine day .When I returned back from my friend's.My father looked very happy on his face .He told me that I was permitted into the PeKing university .After hearing that ,I had a a feeling of flying .May be you think that's nothing .but for me ,you know ,that's a long terms hard working .I have waited for this day for a long time . Though it has passed for one year ,but the day will always in my mind .not for myself ,but also for my whole family for my success is always theirs.
第2个回答 2009-07-17
this is the most important day of my life.I came over to my friend's home and had seen a old woman was sitting next to the tree.she was friengdly when I'm going and had sitting the sit behind her.I'm happy whe I think she is my enjoy god.I gie her a piece of bread and got a smile from her.Next,I give her 7-up.she smile to me again and kiss me.
she and I keep sitting and smile but notalking all afternoon.
she has the most beautiful smile.I love sheand that day.It's make me always friendly to everybody and got other's love!!
she and I keep sitting and smile but notalking all afternoon.
she has the most beautiful smile.I love sheand that day.It's make me always friendly to everybody and got other's love!!
第3个回答 2009-07-22
仅供参考。多少有些启发。写作的格式还是建议套用模板,写作的内容可以参考下面的,并结合自己的经历
可以自己搜索一下 关于 最难忘的一天 的作文。有些可以互用。
可以自己搜索一下 关于 最难忘的一天 的作文。有些可以互用。
第4个回答 2009-07-22
You can describe the day which you married on.