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Last weeked I was interview Professor Wang ,an eye-doctor .
The theme was about the problem of our country's students have short-sighredness.
The date shows that advanced to 50% students have short-sighredness,
and the date is situate the first os the world.
Professor Wang said that it was complicated to explaining the cause about this.
In this world have no medicine to cure short-sighredness,
so specialise suggesed students don't excessive ues of eyes ,and do more outside-sports.
the special tips,
the sitting posture and how to use the pencil was in connection with short-sighredness.

Last weeked (weekend)I was interview Professor Wang ,an eye-doctor (这种结构一般是:名词+ed-名词,但这里要表达什么意思,一只眼?近视眼(short sighted doctor)).
谁接待谁?
批语:I was interviewed by Professor Wang(王教授接待了我); I interviewed Professor Wang (我接待了王教授)
The theme was about the problem of our country's students have short-sighredness.
批语:名词所有格一般用于有生命的名词或表示度量的名词,所以our country's students,应该用the students in/of our country.
The date (时代?日期?约会?怎么表明呢!)shows that (advanced to去掉) 50% students have short-sighredness,
and the date is situate the first os the world.
批语:此句不通。
1.that从句中的主语不能是过去分词;
2.students have short-sighredness“学生有近视”概念模糊,大概说想说students have short-sighted学生是近视的(系表结构)
3. the date is situate the first os the world.搞不明白表达什么意思。

Professor Wang said that it was complicated to explaining the cause about this.
批语:it was complicated to explaining中it 是形式主语,后置的主语可以是补定式、动名词或从句,你这里四不像,既非不定式,也非动名词。
In this world have no medicine to cure short-sighredness,
批语:动词have没有主语,介词短语In this world不能作主语,可以用there is no medicine to cure short-sights in this world,
so specialise suggesed students don't excessive (形容词不可做use的状语,加ly改为副词)ues of eyes ,and do more outside-sports.
批语:
1. suggest的宾语从句要用虚拟语气: students (should可省略) not excessively use theit eyes。
2. use of ... use的词性转变成名词,但这里需要动词。
the special tips, (什么意思?)
the sitting posture and how to use the pencil was in connection with short-sighredness.
注意英语近视的不同概念:(你都拼写错了)
short sighted 近视的,形容词;
short sight 近视眼,具体名词;
short sightedness由形容词转化而来的名词,具有近视特征的概念,抽象名词。
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第1个回答  2009-07-13
Last weeked I interviewed Professor Wang ,an eye-doctor .
The theme was the problem that our country's students have short-sighredness.
The date shows that advancing to 50% students have short-sighredness,
and the date situates the first os the world.
Professor Wang said that it was complicated to explain the cause of this.
In this world having no medicine cures short-sighredness,
so specialist suggesed students not excessively using eyes ,and do more outside-sports.
the special tips,
the sitting posture and how to use the pencil connect with short-sighredness.
第2个回答  2009-07-13
interview改为interviewed
students改为student
第3个回答  2009-07-13
interview加ing
第4个回答  2020-01-28
At
present,
playing
computer
games
is
becoming
more
and
more
popular
with
people,especially
with
students:Taking
Tom
and
Mike
for
example.
Every
day
after
(the)
school,they
go
to
the
computer
bar
to
play
games
till
late
at
night,and
they
often
have
a
competition
to
see
who
wins
more
scores.
Once,Tom
didn't
go
home
until
eleven
o'clock
at
night.
When
he
got
home,he
told
his
mother
he
had
(been)
gone
over
his
lessons.Poor
mom!She
believed
him
and
cooked
two
eggs
for
him."Take
more
care
of
yourself
as
you
work
too
hard
my
dear
son."She
said.
Tom's
face
turned
red
at
his
mother's
praise.Later
he
made
his
mind
(to)
work
really
hard.

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