Mrs.Brown is an engineer.Her job is design new computers.She is interesting in the work an works hard.Before work she hurries home to prepare supper.She's busy,but has a few interests.She really enjoyed sports.She plays the tennis twice a week.On Sundays,she usually has a shortly walk by herself after supper near the park which isn't far from his home .She has no time to do so on weekdays.She usually takes the bus to work.The boss in which company she works says she is one of the best worker in the company.
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1，is design → is to desigh to do在这里做表语 2,is intresting in → is interested in这是个固定搭配
3,an → and 从句意上看这句话应该是并列的要用and 4,Before work → After work回家做晚饭应该是工作后 5,enjoyed sports → enjoys sports全文都是以一般现在时在描述，所以时态要一致 6,plays the tennis → plays tennis球类运动前面不加冠词 7,shortly walk → short walk副词修饰动词，形容词修饰名词walk 在这里做名词 8his home→ her home Mrs.Brown 这个次可以看出她是女性用her 9takes the bus → takes a bus the是特指，a 是泛指，这里没有说具体的哪一路车 10, one of the best worker→ one of the best workers one of 后面的名词要用复数
3,an → and 从句意上看这句话应该是并列的要用and 4,Before work → After work回家做晚饭应该是工作后 5,enjoyed sports → enjoys sports全文都是以一般现在时在描述，所以时态要一致 6,plays the tennis → plays tennis球类运动前面不加冠词 7,shortly walk → short walk副词修饰动词，形容词修饰名词walk 在这里做名词 8his home→ her home Mrs.Brown 这个次可以看出她是女性用her 9takes the bus → takes a bus the是特指，a 是泛指，这里没有说具体的哪一路车 10, one of the best worker→ one of the best workers one of 后面的名词要用复数
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第1个回答 2009-11-26
Mrs.Brown is an engineer.Her job is to design new computers.She is interested in the work and works hard.Before working she hurries to home to prepare for supper.She's busy,but has few interests.She really enjoys sports.She plays the tennis twice a week.On Sundays,she usually has a short walk by herself after supper near the park which isn't far from her home .She has no time to do so on weekdays.She usually takes the bus to work.The boss in which company she works says she is one of the best workers in the company.
只能改这么多了
只能改这么多了
第2个回答 2009-11-26
刚好十处错误！
1. is desing → is to design
2. is interesting in → is interested in
3. Before work → After work
4. really enjoyed sports → really enjoys sports
5. plays the tennis → plays tennis
6. a shortly walk → a short walk
7. from his home → from her home
8. takes the bus → takes a bus
9. in which company → in whose company
10. the best worker → the best workers
1. is desing → is to design
2. is interesting in → is interested in
3. Before work → After work
4. really enjoyed sports → really enjoys sports
5. plays the tennis → plays tennis
6. a shortly walk → a short walk
7. from his home → from her home
8. takes the bus → takes a bus
9. in which company → in whose company
10. the best worker → the best workers
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第3个回答 2009-11-27
1.Mrs.Brown is an engineer.
2.Her job is design new computers.
3.She is interesting in the work an works hard.
4.Before work she hurries home to prepare supper.
5.She's busy,but has a few interests.She really enjoyed sports.
6.She plays the tennis twice a week.
7.On Sundays,she usually has a shortly walk by herself after supper near the park which isn't far from his home .
8.She has no time to do so on weekdays.
9.She usually takes the bus to work.
10.The boss in which company she works says she is one of the best worker in the company.
句号：
2. is design → is to design
2. is interesting in → is interested in
3. an→ and
4. Before work → After working
5. really enjoyed sports → really enjoys sports
6. plays the tennis → plays tennis
7. a shortly walk → a short walk
7. from his home → from her home
10. the best worker → the best workers
2.Her job is design new computers.
3.She is interesting in the work an works hard.
4.Before work she hurries home to prepare supper.
5.She's busy,but has a few interests.She really enjoyed sports.
6.She plays the tennis twice a week.
7.On Sundays,she usually has a shortly walk by herself after supper near the park which isn't far from his home .
8.She has no time to do so on weekdays.
9.She usually takes the bus to work.
10.The boss in which company she works says she is one of the best worker in the company.
句号：
2. is design → is to design
2. is interesting in → is interested in
3. an→ and
4. Before work → After working
5. really enjoyed sports → really enjoys sports
6. plays the tennis → plays tennis
7. a shortly walk → a short walk
7. from his home → from her home
10. the best worker → the best workers
