请各位英语高手帮我检查一下翻译的对不对

楼上的几处问题
1 go-off不能作We的表语 应为 We seldom go off.
2 How may句型回答应用There are...
3 While表示转折时一般表示的是同类事物间比较 故此处最宜使用Although q且应该是makes
4 goes to 而且可以省略the

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我们很少出门
We are seldom go-off.
你们班有多少人？我们班有52人。
How many people are there in your classroom?Our class have 52 people.
虽然他是好学生，但偶尔也会范错。
While he is a good student,sometimes alike make mistake.
我爸从来不去公园。
My father never go to the park.
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我们很少出门
We are rarely go-out.
你们班有多少人？我们班有52人。
How many people are in your class?there are 52.
虽然他是好学生，但偶尔也会范错。
While he is good student,but sometimes he also make mistakes.
我爸从来不去公园。
My father never go to the park.

1.we seldom go out
2.how many people in your class?there are 52
3.although he is a good student,sometimes he might make mistakes
4.my father never goes to the park本回答被提问者采纳

We selddom go out.
How many people are there in your class? There are 52 people in our class.
Although he is a good student, he still makes mistakes occassionally.
My father don't go to the park.