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1961年7月2日，蜚声世界文坛的海明威用自己的猎枪结束了自己的生命。整个世界都为此震惊，人们纷纷叹息这位巨人的悲剧。美国人民更是悲悼这位美国重要作家的陨落。
我的翻译是：
On July 2 1961,Ernest Hemingway ended his life with a shotgun.This has shocked the entire wolrd,people have lamented the tragedy of the giant.The American people mourn the United States is more important witer of fall.
你的翻译中除了最后一句之外基本框架已经有了。但是忽略了时态以及句子的连贯。修改如下：
On July 2 1961, Ernest Hemingway,who is eminently famed in the whole literary world, ended his life with a shotgun. The entire world was shocked and numerous people lamented the tragedy of the giant. Americans expecially had mourned for the fall of this important native writer.
On July 2 1961, Ernest Hemingway,who is eminently famed in the whole literary world, ended his life with a shotgun. The entire world was shocked and numerous people lamented the tragedy of the giant. Americans expecially had mourned for the fall of this important native writer.
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第1个回答 2006-09-23
On July 2, 1961,Becomes famous the world literary arena Hemingway had finished own life with own hunting rifle. Entire world all for this shock,
