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On summer holiday my parents took me to Beijing.We stayed at Huabei Hotel.On the first day,we went to the Great Wall.The Great Wall is very long and old.It has millions of bricks.Each brick is very big and heavy.Lots of people from different countries like climbing the Great Wall.We felt very tired when we climbed to the top of the Great Wall.
We also went to the Palace Museum.The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces.It has a very long history.I bought a lot of souvenirs of the Palace Museum.What nice palaces these are!I visited the Palace Museum and felt excited.If you want to know more about the Palace Museum,you can go to Beijing and have a look.
My tirp to Beijing last year .I with my firend went to Beijing last year .We were had a great time .we climbed the Great wall and took photos of stone animals . We ate rost duck and bought some presentsto my parenets .Finaly,I visit the Palace Museum witn my firends. 我去年去北京的旅行。我和我的朋友去年去了北京。我们玩的很愉快。我们爬长城和拍石头动物的照片。我们北京烤鸭和购买些礼物给我的父母。最后，我和我的朋友参观了故宫。
i live very happily today! in the morning, it is very fine! then i climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. coming back home in the evening, family and i sat and watched tv together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious! 今天我过得非常开心！早上，天气非常好！于是我和家人一起去登山，山上的空气非常清新，山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家，我与家人坐在一起看电视，我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果，全家其乐融融！
【The Summer Vacation of Traveling】
In terms of the memorable traveling in the summer vacation, the Hokkaido journey with my parents in my birthday was flashing through my mind.
Between my parents who is often busy dealing with business overseas with them rarely spending time with me, and having a great time which we've been there before, the reasons I chose Hokkaido was simple in my birthday. It was a trip to Hokkaido was totally worth it that not merely spent we the day together each other to strengthen family relationships, but likewise we went skiing and went to a hot spring with us enjoying.
On the whole, it was the unforgettable traveling in last summer vacation, which I really cherished the day leaving precious memory.
【暑期之旅】
当一提到在暑假时难忘的旅行，我生日那天和家人的北海道之旅便掠过我心头。
我会选择在生日时去北海道的原因很简单，一来是我的父母长期在国外工作很少有时间陪我
二来是我们曾经去过那里并有著美好的时光。就是那北海道之旅才非常值得，我们
不仅能在一起彼此相处度过一天，增强家人的关系，还能享受著去滑雪和泡温泉。
总而言之，我非常珍惜那天留下美好的回忆，在去年暑假难以忘怀的旅程。
【备注】粗体字是高级文法修饰，以及高级词汇和句型。
另外超过80个字没办法，因为这是高考等级的英文作文。
Dear david：
I'm glad to hear that you will come to taizhou.
Tai zhou is beautiful, it is in the center of jiang su.
In tai zhou, there are many restaurants, you can try some local food here.
There are lots of hotels in taizhou, they are clean and comfortable.
There are many trees and flowers，So there is a less pollution.
In tai zhou, there are many famous place like qing hu it is not far from the center of tai zhou.You can have a good time.
There are many large shops in tai zhou. most things are not expensive. You can buy some wonderful presents here for your family and friends.
This is my hometown，Who is tai zhou.I'm look forward to meeting you soon.
