关于恒心和毅力的一篇
It is a vivid picture depict that an invalid is climbing the mountain.His leg is inconvenient.The hill road is long and the man is worn out but he do not stop his steps.What inspire he to creep the hill out of give up? That's stamina and insistence.
Stamina and insistence is a very rare character for people. It can help us success. We will confront lots of difficulties which like the mountain in the picture in the daily life.but less stamina and insistence people who face the difficulties may give up in the successful road.
The implication in the picture can be a strongly felt in our life. We always see some fat students are running to the end when the slim people have get a good row in the school running match. Those fat students who are insist running to the end maybe are the loser in that match. But throughout his insistence and stamina we may predict they may be the winner of career
菜鸟刚刚学写作文。。。求指教谢谢
考研英语批改。。。
我觉得第二段的其中一个句子应该是这样的：we will confront a lot of difficulties,like the mountains that I just mentioned in the story. But the for the people who had less stamina and insistence, they might just give up in the successful road,therefore insistence is a valuable and important characteristic to have, in order to success in life. 而且我觉得第三段可以写得更好 只是一些建议啊～
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第1个回答 2019-04-29
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